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The Last Battlefield

The Last Battlefield

Yet Another "Unconventional AAR"

Roughly based on my own experiences playing GalCivII, and wondering what it must feel like for the other guys

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Alan Bradley looked out the window of Star Force One as it approached the verdant green planet of Piers 3, soon-to-be legendary site of the Piers Accords. It had been ten long years since the beginning of the Great Leap to the Stars, after a blunder by his well-meaning predecessor had leaked the secret of hyperdrive to every alien race. The end result: a mad colonization dash across the stars that had eventually led to bloody warfare. Now, after a long, hard haul, it would soon be over. The Drengin Empire had been crushed. The Yor had been pacified, and had fled to parts unknown. Even the Korath had been thwarted, the genocidal Drengin offshoot choosing to detonate a spore bomb in their planet's own atmosphere rather than submit to the rule of lesser races. Now, in this year 2237, there would be peace throughout the Galaxy.

And not a moment too soon, Bradley reflected, gazing into his reflection in the window and noticing the grey hairs at his temples. He was no longer a young man, and it was past time for him to retire, as Jennifer had subtly (and not-so-subtly) implied by constantly showing him pictures of their new granddaughter Emily, born on Kryo 3 while Bradley had been holed up in his office fighting a damn war. He glanced over at his wife, looking as gorgeous as the day he had met her in a sequined black ballgown and her auburn hair done up in a tight bun, wearing tiny teardrop-shaped diamonds in her ears. She looked happier than she ever had in years. He didn't blame her. A long, hard period of life would soon be over, and he would be able to spend the remaining years of his life reaping the well-deserved fruits of his labor, puttering away in his garden and writing his memoirs for posterity.

Jennifer turned away from the window, saw Alan gazing at her, and gave him a softly challenging look. "What is it, Alan?"

"Nothing," Bradley said, smiling. "I was just thinking that you and Ynrhed Eidden might get along really well. You both have the same really serious expressions on your face when you're thinking, even if he does it with six eyes instead of two."

The First Lady hmphed. "I don't know, Alan. Those Krynn. . . there's something strange about them. I don't trust religious fanatics, even if they are our friends."

"They're not just our friends, love, they're our saviors. The Krynn are responsible for rallying the Alliance of Free Worlds against the Drengin Hegemony. They halted the Drengin Dominator Fleets for three months while the rest of us recovered and regrouped. They interdicted the Korath World-Killers before they could spore our homeworlds. In a very large way, this is their victory, and we should be grateful."

"They scare me, Alan," Jennifer admitted. "Those weapons of theirs, the number of worlds they control. . . they could crush us in an instant if they wanted. Doesn't that bother you?"

"A little," Bradley admitted, "but when it does, I just think of one thing."

"And that is?"

"I'm just glad they're on our side."

"Are they?" Jennifer asked pointedly.

Before Bradley could respond, he heard a soft voice clearing its throat and saying, "Mister President." He glanced up into the puppy-dog eager eyes of his adjutant, Victor Prakash, a young Indo-European man with a slight fetish for brightly colored ties. He was currently wearing one picturing a series of green-clad elves tumbling down a series of Christmas trees: a strange item of clothing to be wearing in June. "Mister President, I have a call for you on the secure line from the Iconian Prelate."

"Thanks, Victor." Alan patted his wife on the back of the hand and gave her a kiss on the cheek. "Don't worry about it, love. The Krynn aren't the threat, it's continued xenophobia and distrust that's the real threat to peace in the galaxy. This summit is going to be the best chance for peace we've got."

"I hope you're right, Alan," Jennifer admitted. "I just home you're right."

"Of course I am. You'll see." Alan Bradley gave his wife another kiss on the cheek and walked into the back of the presidential pinnace, to the secure communications room (colloquially known as the Hot Line.) He closed the magnetically secure door and entered his private eleven-digit password into the keyboard. The secure system took a moment to verify his keystroke pattern and retinal scan, then opened the channel to the Iconian Refuge.

Bradley wasn't surprised to see Iso the Wise standing in the ready room of his royal shuttle: of course, the Iconian Prelate would himself be on his way to Piers. It was the man. . . or machine. . . standing next to him that took him aback. "What the hell is that bloodthirsty toaster doing there!" he shouted.

"ALAN BRADLEY. YOUR SKILLS AT DIPLOMACY HAVE NOT BEEN REDUCED A SINGLE IOTA SINCE THE TWO OF US LAST INTERFACED," N-1 intoned. Was that humor Bradley detected? He couldn't be sure. He could never be sure with the Yor.

"N-1 is here on my bequest, Alanbradlee," the wizened old Iconian said softly. "He is here as a guest of the Iconian Refuge, and as a beloved child."

"Child. . . Iso, have you gone mad? The Yor. . ."

"The Yor are our children. Prodigal children, yes, and we ourselves have not been as fine parents as we could have been but. . . our children, nonetheless." Iso's lip-tentacles waved in a pattern of Extreme Distress. "Alanbradlee. You must not go to Piers. Our children have shown us the datafiles. There are factors at play more subtle and devious than we can comprehend."

"Factors. . . Iso, what are you talking about? This summit is the . . . it's everything we've ever wanted! How can you turn your back on it now, when we're on the verge of galactic peace?"

"Peace. . . peace can be found in many ways. A pool of still water, poisoned and devoid of life, is very peaceful indeed." Iso the Wise folded his tentacles in the Gesture of Resigned Acceptance. "We cannot stop you, Alanbradlee, and we cannot explain the danger, but we leave you with this warning. Do not trust the Krynn. They are not as they seem. Remember the words of the Ancient One: trust in the Prime Cause, but never allow your blade to rust."

Alan placed his hand under his chin and moved his fingers in a rough approximation of the Gesture of Grateful Acknowledgement. "I won't forget, Iso the Wise," he said, "but I think you're wrong. In the words of an ancient Terran philosopher, 'Keep your friends close and your enemies closer.' If what you say is true, running away from this conference is the worst thing I can do."

"Wise words, if foolhardy. We will defer to your choice and allow you to proceed as planned." Iso the Wise raised his tentacles in the Gesture of Fond Farewell. "Goodbye, Alanbradlee. May the Arnor, if they still exist, watch and guide you. We shall not meet again." And just like that, the transmission ceased.

Bradley slumped in his chair and sighed. "Door Open." He gestured to Laramie A.Z.L. Kinnis, the head of the Secret Service's Presidential Security detail, a stark, short-haired woman with a grim, cold-eyed expression. "Laramie," he said softly. "Can you double our security detail at the conference? But do it subtly, so that my wife won't know."

"I can have the Star Force One security detail reassigned to perimeter security," Kinnis said softly. "Is there something wrong, Mister President?"

"Not yet, just. . . tell me, Laramie. What could get the Iconians so spooked that they'd be willing to turn to the Yor for help?"

Laramie frowned. "I. . . I can't think of anything, but I know it would have to be bad."

"That's what I'm afraid of," Bradley said grimly.
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Reply #77 Top
Woooooow! He's back! He's back! :D
Keep up the best story of all times, please!
Reply #78 Top
 :LOL: My God-the prodigal son returns and what a welcome return it is!!! Welcome back soldier-lovely post too-great to have you back to the writing fraternity

 :LOL:  :CONGRAT: 
Reply #79 Top
Great to see you back mate!! Hope you do get around to finishing this story..
:D
Reply #81 Top
 :NOTSURE: 

He hasn't logged on since June 2nd. Pray that he didn't forget about this site again... :NOTSURE: 
Reply #82 Top
I'm jus glad that he's back! If our luck holdes we might even get Namus (Terran Oddessy) back to. :)  :)  :)  :)  :) 
Reply #83 Top
Themocaw, welcome back!    I thought you fell into a black hole somewhere.    Sentient species taste better...


Yeah, that would have been bad. It's kind of hard to write a story when you've been torn apart and reduced to a sub-atomic level...
Reply #84 Top
No. Plese. Don't go. Ever since you left we have missed you. We need to no what happens! Plese don't leave us in the dark! Come back! :SNIFF!:  :SNIFF!:  :SNIFF!: 


(Dose this deserve to be sent to Hollywood)
Reply #85 Top
Spelling mistakes and all..... ;)
Reply #86 Top
I think he's gone again. We may never know what happens in this story.

Speaking of stories, I'd better go finish writing a chapter of Jordan's Revenge. ;) 
Reply #87 Top
Yes you had. :( 

It's OK. I need to finish some AARs to.
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Six months pass, and the prodigal returns once more. . .

"So, what do you think they're doing?" Quinn asked.

"Who do you mean?"

"The Krynn, of course." Lieutenant O'Malley said, tapping a finger lightly over the big red button on his console. "Damn strange way to fight a war. Declare war on everyone, then spend the next six months doing absolutely nothing?"

"Maybe they realized they made a mistake," Vashti mused.

"Then why don't they surrender? I'm telling ya, something weird's going on. . ."

"Cut the chatter. Blood in the water," Captain Keller said, looking up from her scopes. "Quinn, get me a ping."

"Pinging. . . got it," O'Malley said. "Looks like a Class Nine Transport. Flying Arcean colors."

"Fair game. Give me a firing solution."

"Got it. . . inputting now. . . missiles primed and locked."

"Fire."

"Fish in the water."

"Take us out of here," Keller said, folding away her scope and stretching out.

TAS Birmingham silently drifting away from the cover of its asteroid, the stealthed missiles it had fired slowly drifting towards the unsuspecting transport vessel. "What do you suppose they were carrying?" O'Malley wondered.

"Weapons. . . food. . . supplies. Maybe VIPs. Damn, I hope it's carrying VIPs," Vashti said bitterly. "Give them a taste of their own medicine."

* * *

Bradley rubbed a hand over the stubble on his chin. The man in the mirror was a far cry from the vibrant, energetic man who had gone to Piers six months ago. He looked tired, withered. . . old. And he felt older.

In the wake of the disastrous conference at Piers, the full extent of the Arcean plot had been revealed. Out of the dozens of heads of state who had arrived at the asteroid, only five had left alive: Ynrhed Eidden of the Krynn, Alan Bradley of Earth, Lord Vega of Arcea, Elys Mue of Altaria, and Kralax of Korx. The I-League, its entire leadership decimated, had been easy pickings, the Arcean warships trampling over the remnants of the independent worlds with ease. Altaria, still reeling from the effects of the long war, had fallen to the Arcean warships as well: once again, Elys Mue found herself the head of a desperate resistance movement, against a new foe this time. The Krynn had simply disappeared, retreating to their core worlds and destroying any ship that came too close. As for the Korx. . . well, the Korx were the Korx. Damn bastards were probably figuring out some way to make a profit from this whole mess.

A soft chime rang on the intercom. The world-weary face of Victor Prakash, wearing a humorous necktie depicting bunnies and eggs, appeared on the screen. "Mister President," Victor said, "the ambassador will be arriving shortly."

"I'll meet him in the conference room. Any other items?"

"Just one. The National Planetary Society has finished surveying the Krynn Seven worlds. They have detected no traces of any threats, biological, mimetic, nanotechnological, or radiological. They have, in fact, declared them safe for colonization. With your permission. . ."

"Check them again!" Bradley snapped. "The Krynn MUST have something up their sleeves! No one sets a foot on one of those planets until we find it!"

"With all due respect, Mister President," Victor said quietly, "The refugee situation is getting untenable. We need a place to put them all."

"We're not going to put them in the middle of a Krynn deathtrap! No one goes in there unless. . . no, no, you're right, we need to. . ." Bradley sighed and rubbed his forehead. "Star Force Corps of Engineers goes in first. If they find anything odd, stop the colonization immediately. Was there anything else?"

"Just one more thing. Dr. Clef has finished his analysis of the Krynn Data Packet. It looks clean."

"He's certain? I was sure at least that would be tainted. . ." Bradley shook his head. "Victor, am I to believe that the Krynn just up and gave us seven planets, a lifetime's worth of data, and then declared war on us? Why the hell would they do that?"

"Perhaps to make it a fair fight?"

"Ha! Sportsmanship to a Krynn is that they'll stab you in the front instead of the back."

"And where do you intend to stab them, Mister President?" Victor asked somberly.

"Anywhere I can," Bradley admitted. He glanced down at his watch. Showtime. "I'm meeting with the ambassador now. Keep me informed."

He closed the channel and walked into the conference room. Outside the striking wall-to-ceiling windows, he could see the dull grey shuttlecraft with the insignia of the Korath Clan approaching the space station.

"Now let's see if I can make a deal with the devil to save Heaven," Bradley muttered.

Reply #89 Top

Hazzah! The undisputed master returns. This is a cracking story themocaw.

Reply #90 Top

Back again! Hope we won't have to wait six months for the next chapter :grin: ... 'cause I can't wait for the next one!

Reply #91 Top

wicked to have you back Themo-the best writer on here bar none-now dont wait 6 months before the next installment PLEEEAAASEEE:grin:

Reply #92 Top

Welcome back Themocaw! :D

Kzinti empire2.JPG Sentient species taste better...

Reply #93 Top

Woot!!!!! Welcome back! Keep the story going! We love it!

Reply #95 Top

aaaaaaaannnnnnnnndddddddd...............Hes gone again

Its only been a few days. Give it time. If he's not back in a month, well then, he's gone.

Reply #96 Top

I take it he's gone lol.

Only on this forum do people take the time to write up good stories without endings for no apparent reason.

Not I!

 

Reply #97 Top

I say forget this story and let it sink into the abyss. He's never going to come back. I wish he would, but he wont.

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Dear whoever it was who stocked Galactic Civilizations II: Ultimate Edition in that one shelf at Fry's where it would be right there at eye level as I was walking back from buying a new hard drive to replace my old broken one: thanks a lot, buddy. My free time has a few words with you, as does my sleeping time.

There was little honor in slaughter, Centurion Naga knew, but it was satisfying nonetheless, in a primal, bestial sense, rather like the hungers that came with the onset of reproductive impulse. Warriors, by necessity, learned to sublimate such desires, often through violence: he sometimes wondered whether the Altarians being butchered by the thousands knew that.

He stepped over the slain body of an Altarian male burned to death by plasma fire, and walked through the rubble of the bombarded city, his gold-and-green powered armor suit whirring softly as the servomotors enhanced his already powerful musculature. Up ahead, he could see a swarm of dropships, each carrying over a thousand trained soldiers, descending from orbit like meteors, the interdiction fire of the fighters meeting the rising streaks of plasma from anti-space batteries, the false dawn of the scarlet energy illuminating the broken spires of the Altarian city.

"Centurion." A young warrior approached, his hand held across his chest in a ceremonial salute: Decarion Jarag, his adjutant. "First Talon has finished sweeping the caves to the East. They report no casualties, and the sector is secure. They also brought you something you should see."

"Very well, then. Order Second and Third Talons to continue the sweep. Continue to close into the capital. I want that city in Arcean hands by the next sundown. Carry on."

The field command center had been set up in what, his aides told him, had once been an Altarian gymnasium for children. The high ceilings and broad open spaces were well suited for Arcean physiology, more so than the cramped, low ceilings that the lesser races preferred. A massive, low-slung, beetle-like armored vehicle lay in a scorched field of grass, its engine taken apart, the plasma inductor coils being repaired by a laconic-looking repair team. A platoon of warriors rested on the hillside, chewing on field rations and polishing their weaponry. A trio of Altarian prisoners knelt in the center of a circle of warriors: one of them was calling out to his comrades, taking bets on how long they would last in a fight against a single warrior. Odds were against the prisoners.

He stepped into the makeshift prison cell, once a storage facility for athletic equipment, and smiled. "Well," he said, his scaled, green face twisting into a haughty grin. "This is truly interesting."

The Altarian woman was battered, bruised, and bloody, and she wore a black body suit that fitted too tightly, revealing the disgusting contours of her dwarfish, fleshling body. A bright blue glowing tattoo was on her right temple, and a badge in the shape of a silver dagger was emblazoned on her left shoulder. "It is good to see you again," Centurion Naga said. "Although I may not fully understand the concept that you call 'irony,' I can certainly recognize it when I see it."

"She was armed with this," the guard said, handing over a curved dagger. "So were her friends. They slew three warriors before we could react, then they fell back into the tunnels. Every attempt to fight them in those tunnels failed. . . they used their damned sorceries against us. In the end, we had to bring in a heavy artillery piece and collapse the tunnels. She was the only survivor."

"Why was she allowed to keep her equipment?" Centurion Naga asked.

"She has no concealed weaponry," the guard pointed out. He indicated the woman's close-fitting garment.

"She is Altarian, you idiot. Her clothing itself could be a weapon, for all we know. Their damned sorcerers work with invisible machines and molecular-level weapons. Have her stunned, then take away the garment and replace it with a frock. While you're at it, have her swept by a surgeon for hidden internals. Then put her in restraints and have her sent for interrogation."

"This seems like too much trouble for one weakling. Why not have her killed?"

Centurion Naga glowered at the young guard. "On the day that you understand the difference between a weakling and a warrior, you will find an answer to that question."

"Apologies, Centurion." The guard lowered his head in supplication.

"Carry on." Centurion Naga turned to the Altarian prisoner, who had said nothing throughout the whole conversation. "Please enjoy your stay as our guest, Field Commander," Naga said, mockingly. "After all, we're all friends now, aren't we?"

Field Commander Saya La'ir replied by spitting into Centurion Naga's face. The Centurion admitted that her accuracy was fairly impressive.

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Reply #99 Top

Well well well......the prodigal son returns and all the reading world rejoices :D :D :D

Reply #100 Top

Awesome. Now please dont take so long to put up another freaking chapter again.