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The Last Battlefield

The Last Battlefield

Yet Another "Unconventional AAR"

Roughly based on my own experiences playing GalCivII, and wondering what it must feel like for the other guys

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Alan Bradley looked out the window of Star Force One as it approached the verdant green planet of Piers 3, soon-to-be legendary site of the Piers Accords. It had been ten long years since the beginning of the Great Leap to the Stars, after a blunder by his well-meaning predecessor had leaked the secret of hyperdrive to every alien race. The end result: a mad colonization dash across the stars that had eventually led to bloody warfare. Now, after a long, hard haul, it would soon be over. The Drengin Empire had been crushed. The Yor had been pacified, and had fled to parts unknown. Even the Korath had been thwarted, the genocidal Drengin offshoot choosing to detonate a spore bomb in their planet's own atmosphere rather than submit to the rule of lesser races. Now, in this year 2237, there would be peace throughout the Galaxy.

And not a moment too soon, Bradley reflected, gazing into his reflection in the window and noticing the grey hairs at his temples. He was no longer a young man, and it was past time for him to retire, as Jennifer had subtly (and not-so-subtly) implied by constantly showing him pictures of their new granddaughter Emily, born on Kryo 3 while Bradley had been holed up in his office fighting a damn war. He glanced over at his wife, looking as gorgeous as the day he had met her in a sequined black ballgown and her auburn hair done up in a tight bun, wearing tiny teardrop-shaped diamonds in her ears. She looked happier than she ever had in years. He didn't blame her. A long, hard period of life would soon be over, and he would be able to spend the remaining years of his life reaping the well-deserved fruits of his labor, puttering away in his garden and writing his memoirs for posterity.

Jennifer turned away from the window, saw Alan gazing at her, and gave him a softly challenging look. "What is it, Alan?"

"Nothing," Bradley said, smiling. "I was just thinking that you and Ynrhed Eidden might get along really well. You both have the same really serious expressions on your face when you're thinking, even if he does it with six eyes instead of two."

The First Lady hmphed. "I don't know, Alan. Those Krynn. . . there's something strange about them. I don't trust religious fanatics, even if they are our friends."

"They're not just our friends, love, they're our saviors. The Krynn are responsible for rallying the Alliance of Free Worlds against the Drengin Hegemony. They halted the Drengin Dominator Fleets for three months while the rest of us recovered and regrouped. They interdicted the Korath World-Killers before they could spore our homeworlds. In a very large way, this is their victory, and we should be grateful."

"They scare me, Alan," Jennifer admitted. "Those weapons of theirs, the number of worlds they control. . . they could crush us in an instant if they wanted. Doesn't that bother you?"

"A little," Bradley admitted, "but when it does, I just think of one thing."

"And that is?"

"I'm just glad they're on our side."

"Are they?" Jennifer asked pointedly.

Before Bradley could respond, he heard a soft voice clearing its throat and saying, "Mister President." He glanced up into the puppy-dog eager eyes of his adjutant, Victor Prakash, a young Indo-European man with a slight fetish for brightly colored ties. He was currently wearing one picturing a series of green-clad elves tumbling down a series of Christmas trees: a strange item of clothing to be wearing in June. "Mister President, I have a call for you on the secure line from the Iconian Prelate."

"Thanks, Victor." Alan patted his wife on the back of the hand and gave her a kiss on the cheek. "Don't worry about it, love. The Krynn aren't the threat, it's continued xenophobia and distrust that's the real threat to peace in the galaxy. This summit is going to be the best chance for peace we've got."

"I hope you're right, Alan," Jennifer admitted. "I just home you're right."

"Of course I am. You'll see." Alan Bradley gave his wife another kiss on the cheek and walked into the back of the presidential pinnace, to the secure communications room (colloquially known as the Hot Line.) He closed the magnetically secure door and entered his private eleven-digit password into the keyboard. The secure system took a moment to verify his keystroke pattern and retinal scan, then opened the channel to the Iconian Refuge.

Bradley wasn't surprised to see Iso the Wise standing in the ready room of his royal shuttle: of course, the Iconian Prelate would himself be on his way to Piers. It was the man. . . or machine. . . standing next to him that took him aback. "What the hell is that bloodthirsty toaster doing there!" he shouted.

"ALAN BRADLEY. YOUR SKILLS AT DIPLOMACY HAVE NOT BEEN REDUCED A SINGLE IOTA SINCE THE TWO OF US LAST INTERFACED," N-1 intoned. Was that humor Bradley detected? He couldn't be sure. He could never be sure with the Yor.

"N-1 is here on my bequest, Alanbradlee," the wizened old Iconian said softly. "He is here as a guest of the Iconian Refuge, and as a beloved child."

"Child. . . Iso, have you gone mad? The Yor. . ."

"The Yor are our children. Prodigal children, yes, and we ourselves have not been as fine parents as we could have been but. . . our children, nonetheless." Iso's lip-tentacles waved in a pattern of Extreme Distress. "Alanbradlee. You must not go to Piers. Our children have shown us the datafiles. There are factors at play more subtle and devious than we can comprehend."

"Factors. . . Iso, what are you talking about? This summit is the . . . it's everything we've ever wanted! How can you turn your back on it now, when we're on the verge of galactic peace?"

"Peace. . . peace can be found in many ways. A pool of still water, poisoned and devoid of life, is very peaceful indeed." Iso the Wise folded his tentacles in the Gesture of Resigned Acceptance. "We cannot stop you, Alanbradlee, and we cannot explain the danger, but we leave you with this warning. Do not trust the Krynn. They are not as they seem. Remember the words of the Ancient One: trust in the Prime Cause, but never allow your blade to rust."

Alan placed his hand under his chin and moved his fingers in a rough approximation of the Gesture of Grateful Acknowledgement. "I won't forget, Iso the Wise," he said, "but I think you're wrong. In the words of an ancient Terran philosopher, 'Keep your friends close and your enemies closer.' If what you say is true, running away from this conference is the worst thing I can do."

"Wise words, if foolhardy. We will defer to your choice and allow you to proceed as planned." Iso the Wise raised his tentacles in the Gesture of Fond Farewell. "Goodbye, Alanbradlee. May the Arnor, if they still exist, watch and guide you. We shall not meet again." And just like that, the transmission ceased.

Bradley slumped in his chair and sighed. "Door Open." He gestured to Laramie A.Z.L. Kinnis, the head of the Secret Service's Presidential Security detail, a stark, short-haired woman with a grim, cold-eyed expression. "Laramie," he said softly. "Can you double our security detail at the conference? But do it subtly, so that my wife won't know."

"I can have the Star Force One security detail reassigned to perimeter security," Kinnis said softly. "Is there something wrong, Mister President?"

"Not yet, just. . . tell me, Laramie. What could get the Iconians so spooked that they'd be willing to turn to the Yor for help?"

Laramie frowned. "I. . . I can't think of anything, but I know it would have to be bad."

"That's what I'm afraid of," Bradley said grimly.
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Reply #26 Top
"That didn't go as well as I'd hoped," Keller groaned. "Damn Arcean pride is going to get everyone killed."

"Including us, if we're not careful," Dube noted.

"Captain, I've got an incoming transmission from Admiral Burnside on the TAS Terra," Quinn said.

"Put him on-screen." The haggard face of the elderly officer appeared on the Birmingham's secondary monitor, to the upper left of the main situation display. "Admiral. I'm sorry we had to leave your dinner party so early," Dube said.

"I'm sorry too," Admiral Burnside replied.

"Tell me where you need me, Admiral. Birmingham is ready to fight on your order."

"Not today, Solomon. We've got a more important mission for you. TAS Birmingham will escort Star Force One to her jump point and see her safely to Earth. TAS Terra and Shanghai will take care of our unwanted guests."

Captain Dube's fists closed in white-knuckle grips. "With all due respect, Admiral, there are three squadrons of Arcean fighters out there. They'll tear you to pieces. You'll need our firepower."

"With all due respect. CAPTAIN," Admiral Burnside growled, "I'm not accustomed to having my orders questioned, and I'm not going to start now, not after ninety years of never taking an inch from any subordinate officer, Navy or Star Force. Birmingham's guns won't make that much of a difference here, but they could make all the difference between here and Earth." Burnside reached for the comm controls turning away so that Dube couldn't see his expression. "Take the President home, Solomon. Remember us."

The screen went blank.

There was a moment of silence.

"What do we do, sir?" Quinn asked, at last.

Captain Dube adjusted the sleeve of his uniform and folded his hands under his chin. "We follow orders. Form up with Star Force One and plot a course for the jump point, maximum possible speed."

"Aye, sir."

***********

Writers and creators of old had imagined space battles raging like fire and thunder, the boom of guns and the shrieking of lasers creating a chaotic cacophany of sound.

Not so.

In truth, space battle was an eerily silent affair for outside observers. In the silent vacuum of space, sound didn't transmit. The explosions of missiles and the impact of hypervelocity railgun bolts played out in a silent tableau like an old black-and-white movie.

On board those ships, Bradley knew, were men and women fighting for their lives. Captains would be giving orders to their men, men would carry out and acknowledge those orders, subordinates would report to their superiors. In the engineering rooms, men would struggle to maintain a ship's engines despite the impact and damage of enemy weapons fire. In medical bays, injured crew would scream in pain as grim-faced doctors tried to save their lives. Reports and information would fly through the ether in clipped military jargon.

From here, though, all he could do was watch.

Arcean weapons had nearly twice the effective range of Terran guns, giving them the advantage of the first strike. TAS Shanghai died during that first volley, a lucky shot hulling her bridge and killing her command crew instantly. Her surviving crew fought back as best as they could, but without a central command authority coordinating firing solutions, their weapons fire was ragged, uncoordinated, ineffective. She killed three Arcean fighters before a fourth casually launched a photonic torpedo into her engine coils and she exploded.

TAS Terra still fought, the massive vessel's point defense systems blazing laser fire into the black, her guns and missiles scoring kill after kill against the Arcean fighter craft. But each ship she killed scored two hits of their own against the behemoth vessel. Already, a dozen glowing spots pockmarked her hull where the Arcean torpedos had shredded the big ship's armor. Like an elephant being mauled to death by a pack of piranhas, it was only a matter of time before it faltered and fell.

Bradley reached out and turned off the monitor, and the grim scene faded to black. "Victor," he said softly, "Get me the reports on Krynn religious practices and Arcean culture. If you can, get in contact with Defense Secretary Eisenberg. Tell him to contact the War College, we'll need their contingency plan in case of total galactic war: I know they have one, those nerds stay up late at night dreaming up things like this. And. . ." He hesitated before this last request, wondering if it was still too early. "I want the crew rosters for TAS Terra and TAS Shanghai," Bradley said at last. Letters of condolence. . . medals. . . presidential citations. . . something. . ."

A war had begun, and while Terra fought, Bradley would fight his own war in the only way he knew how.
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Reply #27 Top
I'm on the edge of my seat, themocaw. Can't wait for the next installment. I've read Diary of a Terran Soldier in the meantime. Love your work!
Reply #28 Top
my god your one of the best writers ive ever seen or read or whatever the word is. your astounding if your this good at the game i would either A) give you everything i had then surrender B) make an alliance and cower behind your back in fear of you or C)compoze whatever pride i had make an alliance with you and stan shoulder to shoulder with you. ... i would probably do the latter but thats only if as good in the game as you are at writing. is there anything else i could say ..i really doubt it. thumbs up to you.  
Reply #29 Top
Wait, I don't get it. Are you the Krynn or the Terrans?
Reply #30 Top
He's the Terran's...
Reply #31 Top
There was another typo back there, that comm log was set to 2030, the year is 2037...

I would like to echo the praise other have given you, bravo my good man! I have also read Diary of a Terran Soldier, excellent work all around. I can only hope that the story I'm working on right now will be half as good.
Reply #32 Top
Thermocaw! Please continue this! We are all left in awe of your story-telling prowess and desire to know the ends to which the Terrans and Alan Bradley deal with this new situation. I thoroughly hope that the Arceans pay for their insolence and are absorbed by the Terrans, or even by the Krynn. Continue, we beg! :: begs in a convincing manner, he hopes ::

GalenEvil
Reply #33 Top
I bet the Arceans simply overran the Terrans and didn't take prisoners. So Alan bradley just cannot continue his story.

The Arceans acted just my kind of scum! Very evil. I like 'em.
Reply #34 Top
Yes i have had this on my watchlist for a while and it is a shame to not see this finished. I really enjoyed "Diary of a Terran Soldier", and this was shaping to be even better, if that is possible.

Please continue....
Reply #35 Top
I've been looking for the next installment every day for a while now. I hope you have time to write some more soon Themocaw. Also check out his Goodbye to an Old Friend story. Thats a good one too.

Sentient species taste better... Sentient species taste better...
Reply #36 Top
Themocaw just might be the best freelance AAR writer with 2nd place going to Frogboy and AlexAtticus. 3rd goes to xpyre(he wrote my favourite AAR ever).
Reply #37 Top
to xpyre(he wrote my favourite AAR ever).


What was the name TP. I'll have to give it a read.
Reply #38 Top
It's called "Fall From Grace". Disclaimer: The full story is in the 'Game Talk' forum.
Reply #39 Top
Ahh yes, i do know that one. A very good read indeed!

Thanks General!




Reply #40 Top
When's next installment coming out, themo?
Reply #41 Top
When's next installment coming out, themo?


The universe is full of mysteries...
Reply #42 Top
When's next installment coming out, themo?


The universe is full of mysteries...


So... tomorrow? day after that?
Reply #43 Top
Arrggghhh!!!!!!

I am suffering here!!!!!
Reply #44 Top
Sadly, it looks like themocaw has not logged on since August 7th. Hope none of the nitpicking scared him off because, despite minor complaints, this is great stuff.
Reply #45 Top
C'mon themo. Don't do the same thing AlexAtticus did with his "For Gondacor!" AAR.
Reply #46 Top
Yea themo, don't be like me either and never update.
This story is too good to deserve that!
Reply #47 Top
"Themo?" *echoes*

*Tries again*

"Themo?" *echoes*

Anybody? *echoes*

*turns off light and closes the door and leaves*

I guess without the star player this thread will die. Too bad. I wanted to see what happens next.

-Fire

Reply #48 Top
Hmmph, would've thought he'd be back by now.
Reply #49 Top
I'm on the edge of my seat eagerly awaiting next installment !! Awesome job I like the humour too heh big johnson spike drivers lol. With people like you writing stories this good I spend more time on the forums lately than playing the game lol. Keep up the good work!
Reply #50 Top
I am sad that this story is unfinished.