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The Last Battlefield

The Last Battlefield

Yet Another "Unconventional AAR"

Roughly based on my own experiences playing GalCivII, and wondering what it must feel like for the other guys

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Alan Bradley looked out the window of Star Force One as it approached the verdant green planet of Piers 3, soon-to-be legendary site of the Piers Accords. It had been ten long years since the beginning of the Great Leap to the Stars, after a blunder by his well-meaning predecessor had leaked the secret of hyperdrive to every alien race. The end result: a mad colonization dash across the stars that had eventually led to bloody warfare. Now, after a long, hard haul, it would soon be over. The Drengin Empire had been crushed. The Yor had been pacified, and had fled to parts unknown. Even the Korath had been thwarted, the genocidal Drengin offshoot choosing to detonate a spore bomb in their planet's own atmosphere rather than submit to the rule of lesser races. Now, in this year 2237, there would be peace throughout the Galaxy.

And not a moment too soon, Bradley reflected, gazing into his reflection in the window and noticing the grey hairs at his temples. He was no longer a young man, and it was past time for him to retire, as Jennifer had subtly (and not-so-subtly) implied by constantly showing him pictures of their new granddaughter Emily, born on Kryo 3 while Bradley had been holed up in his office fighting a damn war. He glanced over at his wife, looking as gorgeous as the day he had met her in a sequined black ballgown and her auburn hair done up in a tight bun, wearing tiny teardrop-shaped diamonds in her ears. She looked happier than she ever had in years. He didn't blame her. A long, hard period of life would soon be over, and he would be able to spend the remaining years of his life reaping the well-deserved fruits of his labor, puttering away in his garden and writing his memoirs for posterity.

Jennifer turned away from the window, saw Alan gazing at her, and gave him a softly challenging look. "What is it, Alan?"

"Nothing," Bradley said, smiling. "I was just thinking that you and Ynrhed Eidden might get along really well. You both have the same really serious expressions on your face when you're thinking, even if he does it with six eyes instead of two."

The First Lady hmphed. "I don't know, Alan. Those Krynn. . . there's something strange about them. I don't trust religious fanatics, even if they are our friends."

"They're not just our friends, love, they're our saviors. The Krynn are responsible for rallying the Alliance of Free Worlds against the Drengin Hegemony. They halted the Drengin Dominator Fleets for three months while the rest of us recovered and regrouped. They interdicted the Korath World-Killers before they could spore our homeworlds. In a very large way, this is their victory, and we should be grateful."

"They scare me, Alan," Jennifer admitted. "Those weapons of theirs, the number of worlds they control. . . they could crush us in an instant if they wanted. Doesn't that bother you?"

"A little," Bradley admitted, "but when it does, I just think of one thing."

"And that is?"

"I'm just glad they're on our side."

"Are they?" Jennifer asked pointedly.

Before Bradley could respond, he heard a soft voice clearing its throat and saying, "Mister President." He glanced up into the puppy-dog eager eyes of his adjutant, Victor Prakash, a young Indo-European man with a slight fetish for brightly colored ties. He was currently wearing one picturing a series of green-clad elves tumbling down a series of Christmas trees: a strange item of clothing to be wearing in June. "Mister President, I have a call for you on the secure line from the Iconian Prelate."

"Thanks, Victor." Alan patted his wife on the back of the hand and gave her a kiss on the cheek. "Don't worry about it, love. The Krynn aren't the threat, it's continued xenophobia and distrust that's the real threat to peace in the galaxy. This summit is going to be the best chance for peace we've got."

"I hope you're right, Alan," Jennifer admitted. "I just home you're right."

"Of course I am. You'll see." Alan Bradley gave his wife another kiss on the cheek and walked into the back of the presidential pinnace, to the secure communications room (colloquially known as the Hot Line.) He closed the magnetically secure door and entered his private eleven-digit password into the keyboard. The secure system took a moment to verify his keystroke pattern and retinal scan, then opened the channel to the Iconian Refuge.

Bradley wasn't surprised to see Iso the Wise standing in the ready room of his royal shuttle: of course, the Iconian Prelate would himself be on his way to Piers. It was the man. . . or machine. . . standing next to him that took him aback. "What the hell is that bloodthirsty toaster doing there!" he shouted.

"ALAN BRADLEY. YOUR SKILLS AT DIPLOMACY HAVE NOT BEEN REDUCED A SINGLE IOTA SINCE THE TWO OF US LAST INTERFACED," N-1 intoned. Was that humor Bradley detected? He couldn't be sure. He could never be sure with the Yor.

"N-1 is here on my bequest, Alanbradlee," the wizened old Iconian said softly. "He is here as a guest of the Iconian Refuge, and as a beloved child."

"Child. . . Iso, have you gone mad? The Yor. . ."

"The Yor are our children. Prodigal children, yes, and we ourselves have not been as fine parents as we could have been but. . . our children, nonetheless." Iso's lip-tentacles waved in a pattern of Extreme Distress. "Alanbradlee. You must not go to Piers. Our children have shown us the datafiles. There are factors at play more subtle and devious than we can comprehend."

"Factors. . . Iso, what are you talking about? This summit is the . . . it's everything we've ever wanted! How can you turn your back on it now, when we're on the verge of galactic peace?"

"Peace. . . peace can be found in many ways. A pool of still water, poisoned and devoid of life, is very peaceful indeed." Iso the Wise folded his tentacles in the Gesture of Resigned Acceptance. "We cannot stop you, Alanbradlee, and we cannot explain the danger, but we leave you with this warning. Do not trust the Krynn. They are not as they seem. Remember the words of the Ancient One: trust in the Prime Cause, but never allow your blade to rust."

Alan placed his hand under his chin and moved his fingers in a rough approximation of the Gesture of Grateful Acknowledgement. "I won't forget, Iso the Wise," he said, "but I think you're wrong. In the words of an ancient Terran philosopher, 'Keep your friends close and your enemies closer.' If what you say is true, running away from this conference is the worst thing I can do."

"Wise words, if foolhardy. We will defer to your choice and allow you to proceed as planned." Iso the Wise raised his tentacles in the Gesture of Fond Farewell. "Goodbye, Alanbradlee. May the Arnor, if they still exist, watch and guide you. We shall not meet again." And just like that, the transmission ceased.

Bradley slumped in his chair and sighed. "Door Open." He gestured to Laramie A.Z.L. Kinnis, the head of the Secret Service's Presidential Security detail, a stark, short-haired woman with a grim, cold-eyed expression. "Laramie," he said softly. "Can you double our security detail at the conference? But do it subtly, so that my wife won't know."

"I can have the Star Force One security detail reassigned to perimeter security," Kinnis said softly. "Is there something wrong, Mister President?"

"Not yet, just. . . tell me, Laramie. What could get the Iconians so spooked that they'd be willing to turn to the Yor for help?"

Laramie frowned. "I. . . I can't think of anything, but I know it would have to be bad."

"That's what I'm afraid of," Bradley said grimly.
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Reply #51 Top
I am sad that this story is unfinished.


I am baffled. Not actually wishing it but does anyone think (god forbid) something happened to Themo in real life.
Reply #52 Top
I'd just Rl itself, many active players have gone like this only to return one day in the future...we sometimes forget, that to other people this is just a game!
Reply #53 Top
I'd just Rl itself, many active players have gone like this only to return one day in the future...we sometimes forget, that to other people this is just a game!


May I ask, then, what this is to us?
Reply #54 Top
Well depends who you ask, if you ask my wife...a bloody waste of time...my brother...just a game...and me...a game yes but with a fantastic community behind it, but not just any game....
Reply #55 Top
Hmmmm....Themocaw seemed like a jerk to me, like "Wheel of Fire". Wonder if anything happened to him in real life. Maaaaaybe if he flipped off a motorist in a bad mood...(cackles)
Reply #56 Top
That's just poor form. No matter if someone is a jerk i would not wish any harm upon them in that manner.

I will admit though to not knowing Themocow that well, so a jerk he may have been. Doesn't mean he deserves what you are suggesting though.

Remember there are people here who liked Wheel, and some of them may feel the way about you that you do about him......Let's lay off the name calling and just hope that this AAR get's finished one day.
Reply #57 Top
Hey, most of yer forum friends are gone, Evilstormbringer, Wheel (that bitch), and others. Wouldn't be talkin if I was you. Womder if Terracain88 is still around...

The AAR is fine, but it needs screenshots
Reply #58 Top
Don't worry, Neilo. I've got your back.

Man, what a strange turn this thread has taken... oh well, it was a very good story, at least.
Reply #59 Top
Wouldn't be talkin if I was you.


Not sure what you mean here. I have plenty of friends here and don't i really care what your opinion is on the matter, not that i understand your "threat" of sorts anyway. And since i have no intention of getting into another flame war with you, i simply don't care.

If this AAR is continued i hope you enjoy it.

Thanks Ghostwes, it was indeed a strange turn. Shame this story was discontinued, it was looking like it was going to be another fantastic tale from themo.
Reply #60 Top
Maybe themocaw is gone, but he aint exiled (yet). Dude, what friends do you even have around here, if you even know them??    
Reply #61 Top
Well, I've got neilo's back. But I'm not altogether opposing you either, Etrius. Doing so might start a flame war in a thread meant to host a quite fantastic(yet incomplete) work of literature. (I don't care what kind of literature but its literature nonetheless.)

Some of the best AARs that have been written are by Themo. "Diary of a Terran Soldier" is a classic on these forums and I think it is not right to disrespect his talent for a tale well-woven even thought you may have a personal grudge against him(as is the case between you and me save the grudge). Even the devs like them(they haven't commented yet but I'm sure they do).

I seem to recall that your rivalry with Wheel was started when he commented ill to your rap. Has the hunted become the hunter himself or would you have opposed Wheel had he not insulted your work? If so then it seems to be an end of our little discussion.
Reply #62 Top
Thanks FB, and well said mate. Diary of a Terran Soldier is by far the best AAR to see the light of day, IMHO.

At this point i think the General might be trying to use humor and it is just not coming off, or at least for now that's what i'm happy to believe.

Dude, what friends do you even have around here, if you even know them??


I think this question has been answered. Like i said i am happy to accept that some thing's you have said is just poor humor. So i am happy to just move on and enjoy the community.

The rest is up to you.
Reply #63 Top
I think this question has been answered. Like i said i am happy to accept that some thing's you have said is just poor humor. So i am happy to just move on and enjoy the community.

The rest is up to you.


Well, it was kinda poor humor, like Wheel o' Fire's...

Firebender, you may be right. I might have thought wheel's comment snide comments funny if he didn't insult my rap.

But what's done is done.

Etrius
Reply #64 Top
Indeed, come join the league mate and have fun playing the game in a very different way and meet some new friends. There is a great bunch of peole playing the league and i assure you, you will find alot of the random banter quite amusing!!
Reply #65 Top
I really need to stop reading AARs from themocaw...it's like crack, and I just ran out of supply...again.

Plot-wise, I think I actually prefer this to themocaw "Diary", but I think that "Diary" had a *slightly* more refined writing style/flavor/I really suck at describing these sorts of things.

Thanks for the mentioning of "Fall from Grace", I enjoy these good shorts/"AARs".
Reply #66 Top
We need MORE!!!!!
Reply #67 Top
We need MORE!!!!!


You aint gonna get any. Themocaw hasn't never showed up for a long time.

Etrius
Reply #68 Top
These things are happening to everyone. we have lost both Themocaw and Namus (Terran Oddesy). X-( 
Reply #69 Top
But General Homsar and Silverbeacher are still around. :)

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Reply #70 Top
But General Homsar and Silverbeacher are still around.


Hey, and you have me too. Check out Altaria' Last Stand and Jordan's Revenge if you haven't read them.

Etrius
Reply #71 Top
Hehe and me with my Despatches from Altaria story  ;) 
Reply #72 Top
How could I forget? DOH!  :NOTSURE: 

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Reply #73 Top
Fall from Grace is good too.
Reply #74 Top
After a long wait, I have been dragged back to the keyboard. . .

"Captain Dube."

"I know." The tall South African Naval officer handed the jacket of his dress uniform to his steward and shrugged into his skinsuit. "How many did they take out before they go?"

"Looks like two squadrons. . . they fought well," Commander Keller admitted.

"Sound General Quarters," Dube said softly. "Contact Star Force One. Tell President Bradley that we will cover them to the jump point." He stepped onto the bridge of his ship, where the status indicator lights now glowed the deep red of General Quarters. The rest of the crew were already in their close-fitting skinsuits, the last-chance pressure suits that would protect them from hard vacuum should the ship's hull be breached.

"Quinn, give me a threat assessment," Dube said, slipping into his command chair and reaching for his five-point harness."

"Three Kig-11 Heavy bombers. . . plus one capital ship asset, Pride of Arcea. The Pride appears to be standing off, but she's staying close. . . estimate that if she puts on full thrust, she'll be able to reach combat range in thirty minutes. The fighters are closing in fast. . . we've got about ten minutes."

"ETA to jump point?" Dube asked.

"Twenty minutes," Vashti replied. "At maximum possible speed. . . Star Force One isn't a warship, she doesn't have the dampers for max acceleration."

"Cut speed by five percent, then place us in a trailing guard position. . . I want our point defense envelope to cover her as much as possible." Dube shook his head. "When was the last time we fought someone who could shoot back, Commander?"

"Three years ago. The Drengin corvette, off 'Lady in Chains'," Keller said.

"I trust you haven't forgotten how it's done?"

"Of course not, sir. Killing helpless transport vessels isn't all that different," Keller smirked.

"Wiseass." Dube reached out and tapped a control on his arm-rest, and a three-dimensional image of the surrounding battlespace appeared in the air in front of him. "All right, Quinn, take us back up to military speed, and prepare to engage hostiles."

"Firing solution entered, sir. Ready to engage," Vashti said crisply.

"On my mark. . . mark!"

There was a stacatto series of thumps as the firing tubes disgorged their deadly cargo, the tiny yellow triangles separating from the larger yellow circle of the TAS Birmingham before streaking through space towards the three red squares that represented the Arcean fighters. The three squares quickly separated, scattering in all opposite directions like a deadly flower, dropping flares and opening up with point defense fire as they did so. "Missile one is destroyed. . . six. . . seven. . . nine. . . four. . ." Vashti shook her head. "Looks like they took out the entire volley. . . damn Arcean point defense systems."

"Enemy fighters closing in!"

"Evasive maneuvers! Brace for impact!" Dube shouted. All across the ship, crew members not already strapped into their stations grabbed ahold of what cover they could, clenched their teeth, and prepared for the worst. Quinn slammed his left control pedal to the ground and pushed the throttle control full forward. TAS Birmingham's plasma drives burned white hot as he redlined her powerful fusion reactors, the whine of the engineering alarms indicating to him that they were all going to die unless he slowed down soon. . . then the low rumble of missile fire slamming into the ship's hull, strangely quiet down here in CIC.

"Enemy fighters have disengaged. . . we're showing light damage on the starboard hull. No casualties," Petrovich reported.

"Firing Solution Entered. . . Robotech on Threat One. . . fire on my mark. MARK!" Vashti snapped.

Dube had often wondered about the origins of that term, but he couldn't fault its effectiveness. "Roboteching," also known as Missile Pattern Romeo, was a firing pattern that launched a salvo of missiles outward from the ship, sent them streaking towards the target, then attempted to envelop the target from multiple directions in an attempt to overwhelm the point defense system's tracking computer. TAS Birmingham's second volley was focused entirely on the lead fighter in the Arcean squadron. The three golden ships attempted to tighten formation, overlapping the effective areas of their point defense spreads, concentrating a greater volume of fire upon the Birmingham's missile volley.

It was almost the right thing to do.

"NOW!" Dube shouted. He needn't have bothered. Quinn had started bringing the Birmingham around the moment he'd seen the Arceans start to tighten up. Vashti pulled the trigger, and a lance of energy erupted from the Birmingham's spinal cannon, the powerful fourth-generation phazor tearing through the Arcean squadron like a hammer through a bunch of grapes.

"I show. . . two kills!" Quinn crowed. "Third Arcean fighter is moving, but her weapons systems show a complete loss, looks like we got her!"

"Give me a status report on the frigate!"

"Frigate Pride of Arcea has accelerated to military speed. . . she's closing in fast! ETA. . . oh hell!" Quinn let out a loud Chinese profanity. "Surviving Arcean fighter has accelerated to maximum speed. . . she's on a direct intercept. . . strike that. . . a collision course with Star Force One!"

"TAKE HER OUT NOW!" Dube roared.

"Firing!" Vashti shouted.

It was a good firing solution, one of her best. Snap shot, turning ship, against a small one-man fighter at maximum acceleration, medium range. . . a tough shot for any weapons officer. And she nailed it.

A good shot.

Not good enough.

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(Taken from the official bridge logs of Star Force One, July 17, 2237)

ENGINEER: Enemy fighter destroyed. . . debris field incoming! Brace for impact!

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Reply #75 Top
Themocaw, welcome back!  :D  I thought you fell into a black hole somewhere.  :LOL: 

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