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Diary of a Terran Soldier

Diary of a Terran Soldier

An Unconventional AAR

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February 14, 2229
Somewhere in Hyperspace

So this is my first journal entry, and the only reason I started keeping one was because Jenkins had one too many beers and got philosophical.

See, we were sitting in mess hall 7117 after training, kicking back and having a couple of beers, and we started reflecting on just how great the ol' "Valley Forge" is. Biggest troop transport in its class, powerful as hell and faster than shit on skates. Anyway, Jenkins started talking about how the really awesome think about the Forge isn't how powerful it is, but how robust it is. Sure, most of the one billion troops it carries are sleeping peacefully in cryo, but there are still about fifty million troops still awake and training, like me and Jenkins.

That number got him even more philosophical. 1 billion. A couple of hundred years ago, that many people was about a quarter of the entire human population in existence. Now we send that many soldiers to far-off worlds to go fight aliens. About half of them get to see home again. So that's five hundred million soldiers dead just like that. Jenkins, being a complete jerk when he gets philosophical, started ranting about how our lives have no meaning in the big picture: we're just casualty number four million six hundred fifty thousand and ninety, not Jimmy Jenkins from Aldebaran.

Anyway, he finally passed out and left me behind to shoulder the weight of his philosophy, and so I figured I may as well try and leave something for posterity behind to prove that Steve Lee of Proxima 7 was more than just a number. More than just another nameless soldier fighting and dying far from home. So here it is, my journal.

Where to start. . . well. My parents were doctors, and we emigrated from Earth to Proxima 7 beacause Earth was getting too crowded and expensive, and we wanted a fresh start. Proxima was where I grew up: it was where I learned to drive, where I had my first kiss and other things that followed, and where the Yor decided to start their invasion.

They hit us without warning: their heavy fighters had shot down our Defenders before we knew what was happening, and then their troop transports started dropping hunter-killers from orbit. Two billion people died in the next four days, including Doctors Crystal and Derek Lee. I, on the other hand, survived, was recruited into the resistance, handed a laser rifle and told to shoot it at anything that didn't have skin. Never fired it once: Earth sent in the cavalry first, and I became yet another refugee running away from the front lines of the Second Interstellar War.

Funny thing is, it wasn't my parents dying that made me join up. It was running away from that fight on that refugee ship. Something about that feeling of being totally helpless and running for your life that I didn't like. Decided I was going to go ahead and take my destiny in my own hands, something like that, be better to be able to shoot back than have to run all the time. I enlisted the moment the refugee ship touched ground again.

Boot camp was eight weeks of hell crammed into six: I can't remember a time when I wasn't cold, hungry, tired, or all three. But soon enough, I'd gone from "This is a plasma rifle, there are many like it but this one is mine," to "I solemnly swear to defend the Terran Alliance and all its interests from all threats domestic and foreign." A couple of hours later, I was on the Valley Forge headed to the front lines.

As "training cadre," we weren't put into cryo, but put into rigorous training: they can do a lot with cryo-hypno, but there are things you have to learn for yourself. I learned how to be a Combat Anti-armor and Tactical Support driver: flivver pilot. If you don't know what we do: take a hovercar, armor it up, and attach a big gun to the top. We're nowhere near as heavy as a real tank, but we're faster, smaller, we have better range, and we're more expendable. The last part is what makes us nervous, and why we get called "eggshells with sledgehammers."

Anyway, Jenkins is waking up, and he'll be totally insufferable when he's hung over, so I'll stop there. Will talk about more when there's more to say.

Ciao
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Reply #26 Top
Very impressive.
Reply #27 Top
sticken with it the whole way ..... oh and Homsar sorry bout that just dont want a good story to be ruined you know
Reply #28 Top
Don't give Homsar a hard time, guys. Feel free to ask questions, just don't expect answers


At least you might in the story.
Reply #29 Top
sticken with it the whole way ..... oh and Homsar sorry bout that just dont want a good story to be ruined you know


It's okay.
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February 25, 2229
Still in a swamp in the ass-end of the galaxy

As you can imagine, this was kind of a lot to take in, so I just shut up for a while. We did some more walking, lost some more blood to leeches, finally caught up with Six on a patch of dry land in the middle of the swamp. Big guy had caught a couple of snakes of some sort and was barbecuing them over a little fire. He gave me the biggest one: some kind of backwards apology, maybe.

"So what do we do now?" I asked One, through bites of Lentzlandian Almost Tastes Like Chicken Meat.

"We continue the mission," One said. She ate with small bites, picking the meat off the bone with her fingers instead of biting it off like Six and I were doing. "The invasion is stalled, and the Yor have the upper hand. However, we have an advantage that they don't."

"What is that?"

"I can't tell you about it. I shouldn't even know. But I can say this: the invasion is stalled, but it's not yet lost." She used her snake bones and a couple of rocks to construct a quick map on the ground. "We are here. We used to be there. We need to be here." She jabbed her finger at a round rock to the north of our current position. "The problem is that there are at least ten million Yor between here and there. And about a billion more when we get there."

"All right. . . and what is there?" I asked, chomping on my snake.

"The Capital," One said calmly.

I spit half-aspirated snake into the cooking fire. "The CAPITAL? As in the Civilization Capital?" I gasped, pounding my chest.

"Ex-Civilization Capital, back when the Lentzlandians had it. Now it is just the Colony Capital," One said. She plucked a bit of snake meat from her cheek and tossed it into the fire.

"It's still the most heavily defended area of the planet! There's no way the three of us will be able to take it over!" I shouted.

"We won't have to. Four and Seven will join us there, and Three and Five should already be there. We won't be alone."

"I don't like how all you guys have small numbers," I noted. "Don't any of you guys have numbers like Five Thousand or Seven Million?"

"There are only a couple of hundred Tir-Quan in existence right now," One admitted, "and only a few of them are here on Lentzlandians."

"How many?"

"That's classified, but suffice to say. . . enough."

"Enough." I sighed. "One, even if you guys are worth 'one million soldiers,' you'll need a thousand Tir-Quan to match the forces of just the Capital, and that's not even counting the other cities who are sure to send reinforcements when they see what we're up to. We're not going to make it."

"You misunderstand. We're not trying to win. That's impossible now, with the invasion stalled as badly as it is."

"Then what the hell are we trying to do?" I demanded.

"Complete the mission. That's all," One said calmly. "Sovek Yad Chia."

"Yad Chia Kalia," Six replied.

"What the hell does that mean anyway, some sort of secret password?"

"I think you'd be happier not knowing," One said, "but if you really must know, ask me once the mission is over." She tossed the remnants of her snake into the fire and walked off. "I've got first watch. You two try and get some sleep."

And that's how we decided to march right into the heart of Yor territory with no air support, no fire support, and the ragged remnants of a failed invasion as our only backup.
Reply #32 Top
You have a gift. I'm really enjoying this.

One suggestion: With a billion Terrans invading another planet, you would be more likely to have Singhs and Chens fighting than Jenkins and Higgins. Of course, there could be a good reason for all of the original soldiers having Anglo names -- the marine units would have to be organized assuming the group all speak the same language. Anyway, worth mentioning, I think.

I look forward to the next installments.
Reply #33 Top
Ghostwes, your point is well taken. Consider, for example, our hero's last name. Also, we haven't heard that many names (about 4 or 5 our of a billion) and Steve isn't one for describing peoples' appearances . I'll admit to being partially inspired by Heinlein's famous, "Hey, did you know Rico was Filipino this whole time?" aside at the end of Starship Troopers. On a side note, that was one of the things that REALLY annoyed me about the movie, turning our Tagalog-fluent, Ramon Magsaysay-admiring hero into another clean-cut white boy. But yeah, I should have made more of an effort to make it clear that we're not looking at a bunch of blonde white guys shooting robots.
Reply #34 Top
The yor have made naming themselves an easy task. GMC-1, Pontiac-2, Mitsubishi-3, Ford-5, Chevy-11, etc..  




Reply #35 Top
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One suggestion: With a billion Terrans invading another planet, you would be more likely to have Singhs and Chens fighting than Jenkins and Higgins. Of course, there could be a good reason for all of the original soldiers having Anglo names -- the marine units would have to be organized assuming the group all speak the same language. Anyway, worth mentioning, I think.


Except in this world everyone is breeding like rabbits. Anyways if you just go off what is happening now the Chens would not be in the running either, they prefer male children right now so in a hundred fifty years they may not be a big group.
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February 26, 2229
This place sucks, I wanna go home.

One and Six took stock of our inventory today. I'm not sure if they were trying to make me depressed, but they succeeded.

Between the three of us, we have:

* One's plasma pistols: both work, and each fires thirty shots before needing recharging. She's got seven reloads. That means, with the one's she's got in the guns right now, about two hundred and twenty-odd rounds of ammunition.

* One's sword. That's right, sword. It's some kind of nanotech: the base configuration is a shortsword eighteen inches in length and one and a half inches wide, but she can switch it to a longsword configuration that increases the length to three feet. She says the edge is made up of hundreds of tiny nano-cutters: think microscopic buzzsaws. Not sure what it runs on, might be solar. One doesn't say. Anyway, I've seen this thing cut through a tree a foot thick with one swipe, and I've seen what it does to Yor, but it's still bringing a knife to a gunfight.

* Six's big gun: KFMG 7000 plasma repeater. And yes, it was taken from a broken-down CATs flivver. That thing is usually crew-served: turret mounted, with a gunner and an assistant gunner feeding them ammo. Six fires it from the hip and he daisy-chained a ridiculous number of ammo boxes together and strapped the whole thing to his back. He got rid of the empties yesterday, and there are five left: that's about five hundred rounds of ammo. At the rate that thing fires, it'll eat through the whole thing in about two and a half minutes of sustained fire, if it doesn't melt first.

* Six's sidearm. Pulse laser pistol, fifty rounds, three extra power packs. He was good enough to loan it to me. one hundred fifty rounds.

* Defensive gear: Six and One have their ninja suits, and while being invisible is great for a while, it doesn't seem to be very protecting. I'm in standard uniform, which is made of ballistic fiber that can stop a 9mm handgun round. That and a nickel will get you a nickel's worth of protection against modern energy weapons.

* Various and sundry knives, grenades, minor explosives, and survival gear.

That's not a lot against one billion angry Yor.

Six and One don't seem to see that, they just nodded and started jabbering in that weird alien language of theirs and making more plans. Me? I sat my ass down on a big log and waited for things to get decided.

Which really freaked me out when someone grabbed me around the neck and pressed a cold steel edge against the back of my neck. "Fos Natha?"

"Fos Sath," One said calmly. She didn't even look up. "Greetings, Four."

"One." The guy let go of me and patted me on the shoulder. "No hard feelings."

"Cripes, aren't there any socially well-adjusted Tir-Quan anywhere?" I complained, rubbing my throat. Then I screamed like a little girl because the guy was a monster from hell.

"What the hell is his problem?" Four sniffed. "Never seen a Jessuin before?" The best way I could describe him is that he was a walking, talking red-skinned frog with bad breath and big eyes. He twirled the hatchet in his left hand and clipped it to the belt of the harness he wore around his waist. "Well, speak up, drigh got your tongue?"

"Lay off him, Four, he's a colonial hick," One said curtly.

"Gee, thanks for the backup," I groused.

They ignored me. "Where's Seven?" One asked.

"Doing her thing off in the swamp, keeping an eye on Three and Five. How about Two and Eight, they around?" The big frog guy sat down on the log next to me, stretching out his webbed feet. Strangely enough, he didn't smell that bad: I thought he'd smell like a frog, kind of wet and damp, but I almost thought I detected a hint of Ralph Lauren cologne.

"Two and Eight are busy leading some prisoners to safety. I've assigned them to rally the survivors and hit the Yor supply lines with quick attacks," One said, holstering one of her guns.

"Guerilla warfare against the Yor, huh? Not gonna be easy."

"Sovek Yad Chia, Yad Chia Kalia." Six grunted, polishing his big gun.

"Speak for yourself, I plan to die in my sleep surrounded by gorgeous females." Four gave me a quizzical look. "Do I have something between my teeth or something, hick-boy?" he asked.

"No, no, it's just. . . I didn't know Tir-Quan included aliens. I thought it was a Terran thing only."

"Hey, I might have three lungs and be biphallic, but I'm as Terran as you are, ape-boy," Four growled. "Took the oath and did my five years, immigrated above the board and everything. Now unless you and me want to step aside and. . ."

"You two stop that," One said. She snapped the firing stud on her other plasma pistol, setting off the spark that could normally ignite the magnetically confined gasses to white-hot temperatures: with the magazine pulled out, it just gave off a big spark and made a snapping noise. "The Alliance is not picky, Lance Corporal Lee," One said curtly. "Tir-Quan candidates were chosen based on suitability for the training regimen, regardless of race, creed, gender, or species for that matter. Loyalty and fighting spirit are valued over such minor considerations."

Four laughed. "Yeah, hick-boy. If you think I'm bad, wait till you meet Three and Five. That'll really blow your mind."

"The way this drop's been going, I wouldn't be surprised if this madhouse included a Drengin and a Dread Lord," I groused.

Four just laughed. "I won't spoil the surprise. Still, you're not curious about what a frog like me is doing in the Terran Alliance Military?"

"I didn't want to ask," I admitted, "I mean, it seems like a sensitive subject and you and I didn't exactly get off on the best foot. . ."

"He happens to be a famous sexual deviant," a low voice purred. I turned around to see. . . well, put it this way, there was no way, unlike One, that I would ever confuse Seven for a guy. At the risk of sounding lascivious. . . okay, there's no way I can talk about her without sounding like that, especially wearing that ninja suit of hers as tight as she did. She wrapped her arms around Four's big, warty neck and gave him a more-than-friendly kiss on the cheek. "Actually caused an emergency meeting of the Jessuins Committee on Public Morals. . . what did they call you, 'the worst threat to the moral fiber of our society since the debauched Emperor Marqual?'"

"That's me, baby," Four grinned, and he planted a big, wet, slimy kiss on Seven that made me cringe.

"You two stop it. We're in the field," One grimaced. "We can't afford to be distracted."

"Oh, lighten up, One," Seven pouted. "Sometimes I think you take 'Yad Chia Kalia' way too literally. Have some fun, enjoy life a little." She turned to me and gave me a wink. "Like what you see?" she purred kittenishly, twisting in a way that. . .

. . .

Anyway.

"Actually, ummm. . ." I rubbed the back of my neck, trying to marshal my scattered neurons. "I'm just a little surprised. I mean, given One and Six, I thought all Tir-Quan would be a bit. . ."

"Uptight?" Four interrupted.

"Frigid?" Seven interjected.

"Antisocial?" Four suggested.

"Boring?" Seven proposed.

"Spartan," I assserted.

"Oh, pshaw," Four laughed. "One and Six are famous for that. We call them the popsicle duo, because they're both cold and they've got sticks up their. . ."

"Lance Corporal Lee," One interrupted. "Let me formally introduce you to Four and Seven, two of the best scout-snipers in the Tir-Quan when they are not being total degenerates. Now that we have all met each other, let's get moving. Three and Five will be waiting for us."

"Awww, you're so cute when you're pissy like that, One," Seven cooed. "You sure you don't want to. . ."

"No!" One snapped, raising her voice for the first time since I'd met her. "Shut up and let's get going." She grabbed her pack and trudged off into the swamp, practically emitting steam from her ears, face red with anger.

"Wow," I mused. "So she does get mad sometimes."

"Only around Seven," Four said. "Darling here has a talent for it."

"She's just so easy," Seven purred. "Always so predictable." Her eyes hardened, and the playfulness left her voice. "Still, she's right. We're running low on time. Let's go."

And so the five of us set off for the biggest, hardest fight of our lives. . .
Reply #38 Top
A truly unique literary accomplishment.
Bravo!

-Scot
Reply #39 Top
Jessuins are biphallic, huh?

Who knew?
Reply #40 Top
I'm imagining 7 as a sexy blond Altarian....mmmmm
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**********
February 27, 2229
Finally out of that goddamn swamp


". . . and so the farmer asks, 'Wow, how did you manage to control yourself?' and the last guy goes 'Arwahahwhawhahaaaaa,' because his tongue is all bloody," I concluded.

"HAH!" Four laughed. "That's a good one!" The big frog-man roared in laughter, slapping his partially-webbed hand against his uniformed thigh. "All right, here's a short one. What's better than fnakrakhing a Dreggha against a chain link fence?"

"I dunno, what?" I asked.

"NOTHING!" roared Four, and he started laughing even louder.

"Shut up," One snapped. "Stay tactical, you two are making enough noise to alert every sentry from here to. . ."

"Oh, quit being such a fuddy duddy, One," Seven pouted. She threw her arms around the taciturn soldier's neck and gave her a kiss on the cheek despite her struggling, and the sight of those two female soldiers in such close proximity was wondrous to behold. "We're fine, no one's around."

"We can't be certain of that, we're deep within enemy territory," One said bluntly, breaking the hold and rubbing her cheek with the back of her hand. "We could be ambushed at any minute."

"Awww, don't be such a worrywart, One, live a little," Seven cooed. Then her eyes hardened, and she dropped her airhead Playboy bunny act. "Seriously, we're fine," she said, tapping her earbud. "Intercepted Yor transmissions indicate that the machines are having trouble with a group of "fleshlings" setting up a remarkably effective resistance in the high mountains. They're taking heavy casualties, and in the meantime, fleshling mortar teams are bombarding their research centers from the high mountains. It's driving them absolutely bonkers, or as close to it as a bunch of toaster-heads can get. They've diverted resources to wipe them out there, convinced that it's the last pocket of resistance remaining."

"Two and Eight?"

"Looks like. I'm also hearing reports of two "demon-fleshlings" who are racking up an impressive number of Yor kills. They've put out special directives to eliminate those two on sight. Indications are they got a piece of one of them: 'Target partially disabled' were the words they used in the last report."

"They're good soldiers, they'll do fine," One said curtly. "We can count on them to complete the mission. Yad Chia Kalia."

"I know," Seven said, but her eyes were flat and emotionless, and I realized then that they didn't expect to see Two and Eight again.

"We're here," Six said, putting up his big gun. The two girls nodded and made their way up to the treeline, next to where the big guy was setting up his massive cannon in a nice little dry defile, a few hundred meters from the city outskirts. "Looks quiet. We haven't been detected."

"Of course it's quiet, you wanker, what did you think, Five and I were going to leave you two holding your tallywackers all alone? Unlike you tossers, we complete our bloody missions," someone growled in my ear, and I felt the muzzle of a gun being pressed to the back of my head. "Fos Natha?"

"Fos Soth," One replied. "Hi there, Three."

"Fos Soth. Good to see you again, One." The gun was removed from the back of my head, and I turned around to see. . . nothing. "What the heck?"

"Down here, retard."

I looked down at the source of the noise and my world did another somersault. There was a little rodent there with a bushy tail, wearing a camouflage headband and carrying a plasma pistol power pack on his back, the barrel held in both hands like Six's cannon. "A squirrel. A fuckin' squirrel?"

"Hey, call me a squirrel again, and I'll collect your balls with a rusty knife!" The 'squirrel' drew a bowie knife he had slung across his back like a sword and waved it threateningly in the direction of my crotch with both hands. "Can I eat his balls, One? Please?"

"No, he needs them," One said dismissively. "Where is Five?"

"Where I left him, standing by to cut the power on my mark. We'll have a seventeen minute window to get through the palace security and into the central core. After that. . ." he shrugged. "We do what we do best. Sovek Yad Chia."

"Yad Chia Kalia," One replied emphatically. "All right, so we've got our plan of action once we reach the palace. How about getting to the palace, what is the plan there?"

Three grinned. "Oh, you're going to love this," he cackled, tightening his camouflage headband and sheathing his knife with a fancy little fillip. "Absolutely adore it."

*****

"You know, when we were in that swamp, I never thought I would want to be back in there ever, but this. . . this is worse than the swamp," I groused. "This is. . . this makes the swamp feel like a day in paradise. This makes the swamp feel like an island vacation. This makes the swamp feel like. . ."

"Shut up," One growled, "You're being annoying and untactical."

"Yeah, besides," Seven cooed, "what do you have to complain about? You're packed in a confined space next to a couple of gorgeous girls all covered in mud. There are guys who would pay good money to be in this situation. Or would you rather be in the other truck with Six and Four?"

I shuddered at the thought. The two big guys already took up most of the space in the other truck, and they were practically cheek to jowl in there. If I were in there, with all the jostling around and bumping, I'd probably wind up crushed like a grape in a steam press. "No thanks," I admitted.

Lentzlandians was a mostly wet planet, covered with a lot of wetlands and swamps, and the area around the capital city was no exception. Filters and processing plants and drainage pumps kept the ground from falling apart, but the problem was that the water they were pumping out was filled with organics, silt, and other sludge that built up on the equipment. For that reason, the Lentz had developed a system of trolleys and trains that cleaned and carted away the silt and buildup and carried it to other places for use as landfill.

Three's plan was to hitch a ride on one of the trains and hop out when it reached our destination. The silt would help hide our thermal signatures, and the Yor would not be unduly surprised to find organic material in one of these carts. The only danger now was that we could possibly be found by guards doing a search of the carts, but experience had shown that the Yor often didn't have the creativity to think sideways in that manner.

We hoped.

I shifted my weight a bit to try and relieve the pressure on my arm and wound up feeling something soft and round. "You know," Seven purred, "if you wanted that so badly, you could have just asked."

"Sorry, sorry," I muttered, knowing my face must be beet red in the darkness. "Didn't mean to do that."

"Don't be sorry," Seven said, and I felt her reach a hand up and fiddle with the zipper of my uniform shirt. "I mean, we've got at least an hour, and although things are a bit cramped, we could. . ."

"Seven, shut up, stay tactical, I'm serious about this," One hissed.

"Oh, I'm sorry, how rude of me, did you want in on this too? We could. . ."

"Shut up!"

"Fine, then, I'll let you go first. I'll even turn around. Be gentle with her Corporal, One here happens to be a virgin as far as I know, and she's as likely to. . ."

"NUMBER SEVEN, IF YOU DON'T SHUT THE HELL UP RIGHT NOW I WILL ACCIDENTALLY DISCHARGE MY PLASMA PISTOL RIGHT INTO YOUR HYPERACTIVE LOINS SO HELP ME WISP!" One hissed.

"Who the heck uses the word 'loins,' in this day and age? Want me to help you tie up your corset, darling, perhaps. . ."

"Quiet down in there, you stupid bints," Three whispered. He had his nose poking just above the surface of the truck, the lid opened a tiny crack so he could see outside. "Incoming Yor, stay down."

Everyone shut up. I could hear the pounding of my heart in my ears and the clomping of Yor feet on the pavement outside the slowly clanking train cart. "Please, oh please, don't come this way," Three whispered. "Shit." He dove down from the lip of the truck and dove down into the silt as far as he could.

The clanking got louder and louder, and I heard two steps stop right next to our cart. "Beep VrEeep," a Yor said, and with a loud clunk, the train stopped. There was a loud clang, and I knew that one of the Yor had opened up the lid of one of the other train cars. There was another clang, louder this time, and I knew they were getting closer. Six and One nodded and pressed a button: their ninja suits activated, and the two of them vanished from view.

Too bad I didn't have one.

I tried to sink as low into the sludge as possible. Maybe, if I were lucky, a Yor who opened the cart lid wouldn't see me amongst all the muck.

Oh, who was I kidding. If a Yor opened up the lid, I'd scream like a little girl.

A Yor did open the lid. I did scream like a little girl. About the same time, things started to blow up. The Yor dropped the lid and turned around just in time to see a massive mortar explosion wreck a nearby fountain and hurl a decapitated pissing cherub into its head. It stumbled over the edge of the cart and into the truck with us. Seven grabbed it by the torso and held it down while One grabbed it by the head, twisted, and pulled. It came off in a shower of sparks and orange hydraulic fluid. "Three, situation report!" One shouted.

"Some stupid bastard had the same idea we did, and didn't bother telling anyone!" the little rodent shouted. "We've got a battallion of Marines running around like idiots shooting things. . . shit!" Three leaped out of the cart. "They're locking down the palace, go gogogogogogo!"

"MOVE YOUR ASSES, TIR-QUAN!" One screamed. She vaulted out of the cart, scattering slime and sludge all over the place, and raced towards the palace entrance, firing both plasma pistols in tandem. "SOVEK YAD CHIA!"

"YAD CHIA KALIA!!!" they roared in reply. I stumbled out of the truck and glanced up in time to see Three unsling his modified plasma pistol from his back and open fire, knocking a couple of Yor back on their asses in the middle of converting from Worker to Hunter-Killer mode: it didn't drop them, but it slowed them down enough for One's guns to finish them off. Seven had found a nice mortar hole somewhere and was picking off Yor with surgical accuracy: boom boom boom, one shot, one kill. Six, meanwhile, was standing in the middle of the square with his cannon going full blast: BADADADADADADADADADADA and Yor Hunter-Killers were falling like wheat under a scythe.

Me?

I was hiding in a hole crying like a baby. I don't remember if I'd pissed my pants, but I remember I was completely out of it. Wasn't going anywhere. Just lay there in that hole holding that laser pistol while things blew up all around me. Don't know why. Maybe it was when that Yor opened up the lid and I saw my death in front of me. Maybe it was relief from being saved. Or maybe I was just a goddamn coward. All I know is, right then and there, I was a basket case.

The shooting stopped. "GOGOGO!" One shouted. "Three, get in contact with the Marines, now, tell them NOT to shell the palace, there are friendlies in here. All else, let's GO!"

Six and Seven got up and followed the hollering One into the palace, leaving me behind. I sighed in relief and rested my forehead on my arms. About then I felt a big hand tap me on the shoulder. "Well," Four asked, a huge grin on his face. "You coming, or not?"

"No, I am not coming," I didn't say. "I am staying right here and not racing into certain death with the rest of your madmen."

I didn't say it because just as the words were on my lips, I saw the decapitated head of that cherub statue, and I remembered seeing something like it before. There had been a little girl on the refugee transport who'd lost both her parents. She'd sat there hugging a doll that had lost its head somewhere along the line, not even having the strength to cry, just sitting there and rocking back and forth. Six years old and already with a thousand-yard stare.

I dunno. I guess. . . I'm no hero. But I remembered what that felt like, and hell, I didn't like sitting around and doing nothing while everyone else was fighting and dying.

I stood up and cleared my throat. "I w-w-. . . I was waiting for you, cocksucker," I said.

"Promises promises," Four grinned. He hefted his sniper rifle and slapped me on the back. "Run straight for the palace doors and don't look back," he said. "Wait for it. . . GO!"

I went.

The only thing I remember from that run is seeing a Yor railgun fletchette actually take off the heel of my boot as I ran: the little shard of metal skipped off the pavement and came a couple millimeters from taking off my foot entirely. I hit the ground bad on my next step, tumbled head-over-heels, hit my head against the bottom of the palace steps (thank God, or at least the Terran Alliance Marines Quartermaster, for the Mark VII Standard Issue Helmet.) I managed to stagger up the steps and get inside the door, turned around, started laying down some cover fire with my little laser pistol.

"MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!" Four shouted, and I turned just in time to see the big frog barrel right into me and shoulder-check me out of the doorway. A moment later, something big and explosive went off and collapsed the palace doorway. There was a shower of debris and dust, and things went black.

I woke up to find a big Jessuins laying on top of me, shaking his head and spitting out chunks of rock and tooth. "Shit, that hurt," he snarled.

"Why, Four, I didn't know you c-cared," I quipped in a shaky voice.

"Was gonna take you out to dinner and a florgath first, but I guess we don't have time for romance, baby," Four replied.

"Hey, I called dibs on that one!" Seven shouted back, cooly taking the head off of a Yor straggler with her rifle.

"All of you shut up and get tactical now!" One yelled. Her right pistol slide-locked, indicating it was out of ammo, so she threw it away and drew the sword. "GO GO GO GO GO!" She raced down the hallway, holding a sword and pistol like an old-time cavalry officer, blazing away with her gun.

"Crazy tart's gonna get herself killed," Four complained.

"Then I guess we'd better go rescue her," Seven said.

"Ours not to reason why, ours but to do or die," I muttered.

"Cannon to right of them," Six recited.
"Cannon to left of them,
Cannon in front of them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of hell
Rode the six hundred."


We all turned to look at Six, who was calmly reloading his cannon. "Last box," he admitted. "I'll have to get a replacement weapon soon.

"We'll tear one off a Hunter Killer for you," Four promised.

"I'll hold you to that. Let's go."

And so we went.

Into the jaws of death.

Into the mouth of hell.
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Whoa... I like all the new movie banners that are showing up in the forums.

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This is awesome!!!



Hey! Shadow that kinda looks familiar They are nice aren't they.



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Congrats

You have erent the "Write a freaking book about this already award"

(well that is if I had the power to give it)  
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**********
March 9, 2229
TQSC "Carlos Hathcock," Sickbay


I asked One today, "What went wrong?"

She said, "Nothing. We completed the mission."

"Yeah." I said, "but so many people died."

"I know," One said. "That's why they call it war."

"But I still feel like I could have done more. . . that more people could have survived."

"And that," One said, "is why the Yor are going to lose."

***

February 28, 2229
Lentz City, Former Presidential Palace


Four went down first.

The big frog was bringing up the rear as we raced down the corridor towards our destination. There was a noise behind us. He turned around. The next moment, a Yor railgun round hit him in the gut. The wall behind him turned red, and he fell down like a puppet with its strings cut.

Seven almost lost it. She started screaming something that I later realized was Four's real name, started to run back to pick him up, but the Yor were laying down suppression fire so thick you could walk on it. It took both Six and me grabbing her and holding her down to stop her from running out there into the hail of gunfire. We dragged her between us into the elevator in time to see Four draw his sidearm, put it to his temple, and pull the trigger. His head exploded a split second before the doors closed.

Things were really quiet after that, just us and the hum of the elevator swiftly descending into the ground. Seven had gotten real quiet: she wasn't sobbing, but there were a lot of tears just running down her face, and she was sitting curled up in a ball in the corner. I was looking down at a spot of red on my uniform trousers. It hadn't been there before Four got hit.

"Why did he do that?" I whispered. "He didn't have to do that."

"He did," One said grimly. "After we knew the Yor are trying to find the location of the Tir-Quan, he did."

"Oh."

She glanced down at her wristwatch and nodded. "Ten seconds. Hang on," she said.

"Ten seconds to what?"

And then the lights went out.

There was the soft, shrill humming of a pair of night-vision goggles being activated. "Six."

I heard movement, and then the pitch-darkness was interrupted by a thin ray of light. I saw Six straining to open the massive elevator doors with his bare hands, the big guy reminding me of a Bible School illustration of Samson doing his thing, and then the door slid open with a soft hiss.

Things were very dark, and what lights were on were red. There was a squirrel . . . sorry, Snathi. . . sitting there in the middle of the hallway, but it didn't look much like Three. This one was shorter and slightly burlier, and instead of a camouflage headband, it was wearing a set of miniature infrared snoopers and a computer rig. "Five," One said.

"One." It glanced around at us. "Where is Four?"

"Four didn't make it," Seven said. She'd gotten to her feet again and was rather unsteadily checking over her rifle. "We're all that's left."

"Damn," Five sighed. "I'm sorry."

"Don't be. He did his job. Kali Yad Chia," Seven said bitterly. She unsnapped her 10x sight from the rifle and swapped it out for a 1x reflex red-dot sight.

"You don't believe that. Not really," One said sympathetically.

"Well, I'm sorry, One, I can't be a cold-hearted bitch like you. I've actually got something called emotions, and I'm trying to control them right now, so just leave me the fuck alone before I start breaking down AGAIN," Seven snapped. She threw the 10x sight against the wall, and it shattered, the sensitive optics inside skittering across the floor like spilled birdseed.

Five cleared his little rodent throat. "Look, we're running out of time. My little bit of sabotage won't last long, and we've got work to do. I need your help right away, or this plan is going to fall apart."

One nodded. "Then let's get to it."

***

There were a lot of Yor laying around on the floor as we walked through that red-lit corridor: One took a moment to stab each of them in the chest with her sword as we went, but none of them put up any resistance. "What's the matter with them?" I asked.

"Computer virus," Five said. "My own special brew. They adapted to it soon enough, figured out a countermeasure, but before then it fried the central coordinators of a couple thousand drones. Not much, but enough to make this work."

He led us into a chamber three hundred feet high and as big around as half a basketball court. In the center of that chamber, there was a massive spire descending from the ceiling like some monstrous stalactite, mechanical components shifting and turning while strange runic patterns appeared all over its surface. Suspended just under the point of the spire was a sphere, about the size of a large beach ball, slowly turning and occasionally emitting a pulse of white light.

"What is this place?" I wondered.

"This," One said grimly, "is what is going to win us the war." She nodded to Six, who walked up to the sphere and waited for a signal. Five tapped a control on the tiny keyboard on his left wrist, and with a loud thumping sound, the sphere came free of its repulsor field.

Six caught it easily and hefted it over his shoulder. "It's pretty light," he admitted. "Just big."

"All right. Let's get out of here," One said.

"No good." Seven was kneeling by the door, her sniper rifle out, and in the lurid scarlet light, I could see the grim look on her face. "They're coming down the elevator shaft. In great numbers, too. Whatever you guys just did, they don't like it."

"Are there any other exits?" One asked.

"None. It's a dead end," Five sighed.

"Perhaps literally. . . all right," One said. "Everyone out and get ready for a defensive action. Five, set charges, I want them arranged around the top of the spire in a semi-circle, we need to. . . oh, screw it, Yon Sa Teth For Laine. . ." she started jabbering in that weird language of hers, and the four of them started laying out their plans.

I took a short walk. There were screens up all around the walls of the room, and on one of them, I could see the Yor crawling head-first down the elevator shaft like mechanical spider monkeys from hell. One of them had reached the bottom and was cutting through the roof of the elevator car with a cutting torch. It seemed to be slow going, but he was making progress, and he'd be through within a few minutes.

Something about that bothered me. I looked up at the spire chamber. Three hundred feet tall. The corridor leading to the elevator shaft was about ten, fifteen feet. The hallway at the top of the elevator where Four had died was about six feet and then it turned the corner. "Hey, Five," I asked.

"Do you mind? We're a little busy here," One said.

"Just a quick question. Is this whole facility underground?"

"It used to be a bunker to protect the Lentz leadership, before the Yor took it over. Yes, it is."

"How deep?"

"About five hundred feet," Five said. "What is it?"

"And you shut down the power to keep the Yor from using the elevator, right?"

"Yeah, that's right," Five said. "What of it?"

I glanced at the monitor showing the Yor struggling to cut through the roof of the heavily reinforced elevator car, then thought back to how short the elevator trip down had been, and the plummeting feeling it had made in the pit of my stomach. I looked up at the spire chamber, and thought about how fast an elevator would have to travel to go five hundred feet in a few seconds. Then I grinned.

"Maybe we should turn the power back on," I said.
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Awesome story! Keep it coming!
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Anyone hear that sound?

That's the sound of my jaw (and probably everyone else's) hitting the floor.

Great story, I'm on the edge of my seat!