Diary of a Terran Soldier

An Unconventional AAR

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February 14, 2229
Somewhere in Hyperspace

So this is my first journal entry, and the only reason I started keeping one was because Jenkins had one too many beers and got philosophical.

See, we were sitting in mess hall 7117 after training, kicking back and having a couple of beers, and we started reflecting on just how great the ol' "Valley Forge" is. Biggest troop transport in its class, powerful as hell and faster than shit on skates. Anyway, Jenkins started talking about how the really awesome think about the Forge isn't how powerful it is, but how robust it is. Sure, most of the one billion troops it carries are sleeping peacefully in cryo, but there are still about fifty million troops still awake and training, like me and Jenkins.

That number got him even more philosophical. 1 billion. A couple of hundred years ago, that many people was about a quarter of the entire human population in existence. Now we send that many soldiers to far-off worlds to go fight aliens. About half of them get to see home again. So that's five hundred million soldiers dead just like that. Jenkins, being a complete jerk when he gets philosophical, started ranting about how our lives have no meaning in the big picture: we're just casualty number four million six hundred fifty thousand and ninety, not Jimmy Jenkins from Aldebaran.

Anyway, he finally passed out and left me behind to shoulder the weight of his philosophy, and so I figured I may as well try and leave something for posterity behind to prove that Steve Lee of Proxima 7 was more than just a number. More than just another nameless soldier fighting and dying far from home. So here it is, my journal.

Where to start. . . well. My parents were doctors, and we emigrated from Earth to Proxima 7 beacause Earth was getting too crowded and expensive, and we wanted a fresh start. Proxima was where I grew up: it was where I learned to drive, where I had my first kiss and other things that followed, and where the Yor decided to start their invasion.

They hit us without warning: their heavy fighters had shot down our Defenders before we knew what was happening, and then their troop transports started dropping hunter-killers from orbit. Two billion people died in the next four days, including Doctors Crystal and Derek Lee. I, on the other hand, survived, was recruited into the resistance, handed a laser rifle and told to shoot it at anything that didn't have skin. Never fired it once: Earth sent in the cavalry first, and I became yet another refugee running away from the front lines of the Second Interstellar War.

Funny thing is, it wasn't my parents dying that made me join up. It was running away from that fight on that refugee ship. Something about that feeling of being totally helpless and running for your life that I didn't like. Decided I was going to go ahead and take my destiny in my own hands, something like that, be better to be able to shoot back than have to run all the time. I enlisted the moment the refugee ship touched ground again.

Boot camp was eight weeks of hell crammed into six: I can't remember a time when I wasn't cold, hungry, tired, or all three. But soon enough, I'd gone from "This is a plasma rifle, there are many like it but this one is mine," to "I solemnly swear to defend the Terran Alliance and all its interests from all threats domestic and foreign." A couple of hours later, I was on the Valley Forge headed to the front lines.

As "training cadre," we weren't put into cryo, but put into rigorous training: they can do a lot with cryo-hypno, but there are things you have to learn for yourself. I learned how to be a Combat Anti-armor and Tactical Support driver: flivver pilot. If you don't know what we do: take a hovercar, armor it up, and attach a big gun to the top. We're nowhere near as heavy as a real tank, but we're faster, smaller, we have better range, and we're more expendable. The last part is what makes us nervous, and why we get called "eggshells with sledgehammers."

Anyway, Jenkins is waking up, and he'll be totally insufferable when he's hung over, so I'll stop there. Will talk about more when there's more to say.

Ciao
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YAY! I wondered when someone would do a soldier's diary AAR. (adds forum to watchlist.) kepp it up, i'm hooked!
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February 17, 2229
Location Classified

I sometimes wish my damn flivver would break down already. The thing's already on its way out: the antigrav is shot, and the microfusion reactor hiccups every time I rev it up into combat mode. The thing is, the military doesn't like to retire equipment until it's truly dead, and so I can't get a replacement until the thing breaks down. I'm tempted to throw a wrench into the goddamn transmission stream and kill it entirely, but if I get caught, that's six days in the brig for destroying government property, so what can I do? Hopefully, it breaks down before we drop, or I'll be spending the next deployment wondering whether or not I'll wind up behind enemy lines with a broken flivver and Yor all around me. . . that would be a bad thing, in case you were wondering.

We crossed into the Yor anti-interdiction field three hours ago: officially, we're not supposed to know where we are for "operational security purposes," but it was pretty obvious when the drives started revving to 200% normal output and the stars still barely moved. We're not sure how it works, or how it's generated, but the net effect is to prevent any ship that uses hyperdrive from travelling faster than a couple of parsecs per week. The damn Yor, of course, can still move as fast as they like, which makes it very annoying to be a Terran in Yor territory.

It's good to have an escort, although it would be good if we had more than a couple of Victory-Class cruisers on our wings: they were state-of-the-art three years ago, but in the world of modern military combat, that's a lifetime. True, the Victory is smaller and faster than the Nebula-class battleship, but that speed doesn't help when you're in a Yor interdiction field. There's apparently an effort underway to retrofit Victory-Class ships with heavier armor and remove the surplus drive units. I dunno. I'm just a grunt, not a starship engineer.

Anyway, here's an example of how bored we get on ship heading into action: Freeman came up with a new game called Smoke Grenade Ferret Legging. The way it works is, you take a half-dozen of the golf-ball sized grenades, pull the pins, and shove them down your pants. No skivvies. You gotta have your pants bloused into your boots and your fly up. When the smoke grenade goes off, it spews colored smoke all over the place and starts spinning around like a freaking whirly-bug. Not to mention the smoke is cold as hell because it's actually some kinda weird chemical fog. Whoever gives up first loses. Freeman's record is six minutes. No one else lasts more than thirty seconds.

It's better than last week, when we were assigned to handle an infestation of rats that somehow developed on the ship. Ask a civvie to do that, he'd lay down poison, set some traps, get a cat. Marines aren't that smart, and at least three times as bored, so instead we went hunting rats with plasma rifles set to 10% power. That's not enough to blast through the hull and kill us all, and honestly, it's usually not enough to kill the rat outright. Usually just knocks them on their ass and sets their fur on fire, and then they run around squealing bloody murder and stuff while people laugh. I got sick of it after one day: roast rat smells like shit, and honestly, it didn't feel good torturing living creatures like that. Some of the guys are still at it, though.

Sometimes feel like some of my fellow troopers belong on the other side of the war: Vecchio's done shit that would make a goddamn Drengin turn . . . greener. . . with nausea. You go to war with what you've got, not what you'd like to have, I guess. Jenkins put it best: "The fate of humanity rests in the hands of 18-year old kids with the maturity of third graders."

Eight weeks out. Dunno how much longer we'll be here. Getting antsy, I'm sick of waiting, I wanna get off this damn ship.

Steve
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This is a very interesting one.

I hope Steve doesn't die immediately on landing and that his hovertank dies before the yor get to him. He seems likable, but torturing rats is just funny, especially with 10% Plasma Rifles. Those make everything more fun

GalenEvil
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You write very well, sir.

Maybe I'll post some of my short science fiction; it's not really GalCiv related, though, nor is most of it mil-sf. Not sure if that would bother anyone or not, to be honest.
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This is awesome, it's nice to see things from a view that is not the leader's!
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February 20, 2229

Might as well tell you a bit about my crew.

CATs flivvers have three-man crews: a driver, a commander, and an engineer. The driver is usually the low man on the totem pole because he doesn't get to shoot back: that's me, by the way, the FNG. My job is to make sure the flivver goes where it's supposed to go and doesn't flip over. That's bad, by the way: anti-grav craft have a tendency to do that, especially in a high wind, and the hover-field generators are fragile, so ninety percent of my job is making sure we don't run over a sharp steel wall, tear out the hover pads and send us crashing to ground. The other ten percent is actually driving the damn thing.

Our engineer is the aforementioned Private Jenkins, he of the sardonic wit and absolutely no tact whatsoever. Jenkins' job is making my job and the commander's job easier: he runs the radio, loads the big gun, operates the sensors, and fires the small gun: the point-defense laser turret mounted on the front of our flivver. He rides shotgun and carries a shotgun too: 8 gauge semi-automatic fletchette gun with integral inertial dampers. Meat grinder, perfect for tearing rampaging Drengin berserkers to shreds.

It doesn't work so great against Yor Hunter-Killers, but I digress.

Our commander is Corporal Josh Higgins, a down-home guy from Missouri who looks about twelve years old but has already served a campaign against the Drengin, earned a medal when he helped drag his lieutenant to safety while Drengin berserkers charged him carrying big machetes and dinner forks. Killed an unknown number of green apes with his rifle, then his handgun, and finally ended up taking down the last guy with a big rock. If he takes off his shirt, you can see a souvenir of that last fight: a big-ass scar running all the way down his chest and halfway down one thigh.

Supposedly, personal armor has improved since then, but I still wouldn't trust it with my life if I didn't have to. We're technically mechanized cavalry, so we don't get powered suits like the infantry: ballistic armor and chicken-plate flak jackets only, with standard Mark IV helmets and sensor visors. Corporal Higgins is issued a plasma rifle as his long-arm, the only one who gets a full-scale infantry weapon, and he also gets to shoot the big gun: turret-mounted 60mm recoilless rifle with coaxial laser. Jenkins carries the shotgun I mentioned. Me? I'm stuck with the pea-shooter. 3mm gauss carbine. It makes a nice pew pew pew sound, that's about it.

We all carry laser pistols as our sidearms, and a varying assortment of grenades, most of which we keep in the glove box. The back of our flivver usually carries about a week's worth of food and water, some repair kits, ammo for the big gun, and some extra fuel cells for our reactor.

And that's about it: three guys, one hovercar, and a shitload of aliens.

We drop in three days. My flivver still hasn't broken down yet. Freeman is trying to get people to start up a tontine: kind of a dead pool. You put five bucks in the pool, and if you're still alive after the campaign, you get a share of the money. Not getting too many takers, though. Guess that's the sort of thing that people just don't like to think about.

Steve
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February 22, 2229

The other troops woke up out of cryo today. They were greeted with the news that we'd just lost our escort cruisers.

Lentzlandians I used to be home to a small civilization called the Lentzlandians, guys who looked a lot like the Monopoly mascot and talked a lot like Jeeves. The Yor took them over a couple of years ago, and now there's nothing but Yor cities, Yor factories, and Yor themselves walking along the ruins of those quaint little houses. Also, Yor Heavy Fighters in orbit around their world.

TATT Valley Forge is a big ship, but it's not very heavily armored: the price we pay for building a ship that's capable of carrying a billion troops into battle. For that reason, our escorts, TAS Bonhomme Richard and TAS Merrimack, went ahead to clear the planet's orbit of threats.

They did a fairly decent job: Yor ships are normally armed with mass drivers, and their defensive philosophy consists of armoring up their ships with heavy plating. Armor plating doesn't do so great against Terran missiles, though: a good Armor-Piercing warhead punches through Tri-Strontium like it's paper. But the thing is, Yor ships don't carry much of that armor, to pack on more guns, so eventually they'll wear down even the heaviest armor plating.

TAS BHR died first: the first fighter they took on got off a lucky shot that blasted the bridge clean off the ship, and the second hulled her with a shot to the reactor. TAS Merrimack managed to take down the fighter screen, but she got mauled in the process: barely at 10% hull integrity, life support failing, weapons offline. Her only hope is to get to drydock and effect full repairs, but the closest Terran starport is a good month away through hostile territory.

Thankfully, there's one that's even closer. Only problem is, it's a Yor starport, the one on Lentzlandians I.

So tomorrow, we're going to drop down onto a planet filled with hostile sentient robots that want to kill us all and try to capture the enemy starport intact so that our escort ship can effect repairs and try to defend us from the Yor fleet that is sure to come by trying to recapture their lost planet. Eventually.

I can't wait.

Oh yeah, and my flivver still hasn't broken down yet.

Steve.
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February 23, 2229
Lentzlandians I

I'm alive, I'm alive, I'm alive.

I'm goddamn alive.

Shit. . . I'm alive.

Damn damn damn damn damn. . . shit. . . goddamn. . .

Christ. . .

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I'm glad I found this one, keep up the great work.
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February 24, 2229 6 pm
Lentzlandians I

Military has an acronym, FUBAR. It stands for "Fouled" Up Beyond All Recognition. It's used for those situations that are screwed up in a militarily efficient manner. So your flivvery breaking down is not FUBAR. FUBAR is your flivver breaking down two hundred yards above ground on terminal approach. FUBAR is a major getting lost and leading a light infantry regiment smack into a column of mechanized cavalry. FUBAR is a general coming up to you ten minutes before the drop and telling you all the plans have changed.

"Spy satellites detected a strange structure from orbit," General Warren said. "Intel reports the enemy calls it a Hyperion Shrinker. We're not sure what it does, but we know we want it in one piece. For that reason, we're going in clean." Clean means no mass driver bombardment beforehand: enemy defenses will be live going in. Heavier casualties, less damage to infrastructure.

Second problem: someone heard about this and decided that us poor CATs drivers could use some extra protection, so they uparmored all our drop-pods: that means attaching extra armor plating to the underside of the protective shell around our hovercars. They didn't tell us they were doing that, or we'd have told them they were insane. Marine flivvers don't have hypercharged repulsors. We can't take the extra weight.

We fell in like rocks. Jenkins managed to keep us alive by cutting away the pod early, with re-entry heat still around us. The hoverpods took the friction, but it wrecked them entirely. We came in on the side of a hill, slid down a couple of hundred feet, thrown around like rocks in a tin can, and finally stopped three hundred yards from a pair of Yor Drones gathering rocks.

Yor don't have soldiers, they reconfigure their Drones from Worker to Hunter-Killer mode for combat. That saved us: we shot them as they were switching their plasma cutters to plasma rifle mode. But it made a lot of noise, and a lot of smoke, and then we could hear other Yor yelling in that weird beeping language of theirs.

We turned and ran for it, grabbed what supplies we could from the flivver and booked it towards the falling stars that were the other Terran dropships. As we did, we could see dozens of red spheres rising up to meet them: Yor singularity launchers shooting down our dropships. There was a lot of falling burning metal and meat, like some kinda devil rain. "This way!" Higgins shouted, and he pulled us into a building and that's when he got his head taken off by a Hunter-Killer's cutting shears.

Jenkins gave it two blasts from his shotgun but there's only so much fletchettes will do against an eight-foot tall, three-hundred pound industrial machine turned mek. He knocked it back on its ass though, got us outside and then we saw three more of the things pop up out of nowhere.

Jimmy whirled around, tried to get his gun pointed at them, and then the one in the front swung some kinda whip and took his hand off at the wrist. The cut was as clean as a knife through sushi, so clean it took a moment to start gushing blood. Jenkins dropped to the ground screaming and grabbing his arm, and I went for my peashooter, but then the HK swung that whip at me again, just cracked it in the air in front of my face, and I put my hands up. The one in the lead turned to the other two HK's and made some buzzing noise. "SEARCH FOR OTHERS. I WILL TAKE THESE TWO FLESHLINGS FOR INTERROGATION AND DISSECTION," my universal translator said.

At that moment, I kinda wished I'd turned it off.

*****

We were led to a building, some kind of warehouse or factory, where there were a couple of dozen other Terran Marines like me, sitting around and looking scared. A lot of them, like Jenkins, were missing body parts. A bunch of others had plasma burns on some part of their bodies. I managed to tie off Jenkins' arm with my belt, make a makeshift tourniquet. He didn't look good, he was real pale and clammy, and his breathing was getting erratic. Going into shock from loss of blood.

Then the interrogations started. . . god. . .

The Yor method of interrogation is simple. They line up six guys. They ask a question. If no one answers, or they don't get an answer they like, they kill a random guy, usually by dissecting him while alive. Then they grab a replacement and ask again. They keep going until they get an answer they like or they run out of prisoners.

They seemed really interested in something called the Teer Kwan. They kept asking that over and over. "Where is the Teer Kwan? Where is the Teer Kwan?" No one knew the answer, they kept asking and asking, and people kept dying and dying, and then we were about ankle-deep in blood, and there was this loud commotion outside, and then things started blowing up.

The lights went out first, and then the Yor who'd been doing most of the torturing got its head blown off by a plasma blast. I heard some glass breaking, and someone yelling "GET DOWN" and then things went absolutely nuts.

Okay, here is the thing, a plasma pistol is basically a really shitty weapon. Plasma weapons are too heavy for personal use, really, even rifles are big and heavy. Plasma pistols are practically unusable: too heavy, too slow, and even if they pack a punch you're better off using lasers, or something else with less recoil. You definitely don't shoot one one-handed, and there's no way in hell you can carry one in each hand and shoot both while diving through a diamond-glass window.

This little guy obviously didn't get the memo, because he was doing just that.

He was dressed in some kind of weird black ninja outfit that seemed to soak up all the light that fell on it, turning him into some kind of moving shadow. He had a plasma pistol in each hand and was shooting wildly in every direction, but each shot hit a Yor, knocked it back or down if it didn't kill it outright. One of them tried to swing that cutting whip at him, and he actually backflipped over the wire and (I kid you not)pulled out a sword and sliced its head clean off.

Then the door opened up, and the biggest guy I'd ever seen marched in carrying a goddamn heavy repeater that looked torn off of a flivver. "Down!" shouted the little guy, and he kicked me to the ground, dropped to his knees in some sort of weird cat-stance. The big guy opened up and started blasting the entire room with plasma fire. Boom boom boom boom boom, sky turns white hot, Yor start shooting back, but they just can't seem to hit him. It's over in under a minute, just a bunch of dead Yor, the gory remains of the hostages, and two blood-spattered ninjas from hell standing in the middle of a charnel house.

"Out," the little guy said to us. "They've got our location now. We need to move, before reinforcements arrive."

I turned to grab Jenkins, but he was dead already. There was a hole the size of a softball in his chest from a plasma bolt. Hit during the crossfire. He looked kind of disappointed, as if he'd been expecting better. "See, that's what you get," his expression seemed to say. "Just another dead guy in a pointless war."

I felt a hand on my shoulder. "We need to go," the little guy was saying. "Now."

I gestured helplessly at my dead friend. "He didn't want to be just another dead soldier," I said lamely.

The little guy seemed to understand, somehow. "Six," he said. The big guy nodded, hefted Jenkins' body over his shoulder, and started carrying him out of the warehouse. "Now, move," the little guy said. He pushed a laser pistol into my hand. "Don't shoot until I say too. We're going to move fast and quiet. Stick to cover, don't be a hero, just stay low and run like heck. Go."

We went. Outside, the war was continuing. There was plasma fire flying in every direction: mostly towards us, but the ones that were heading away seemed to hit a Yor with every shot. There were two more ninjas hiding behind cover firing plasma rifles at the approaching enemy. "Out?" one of them asked.

"Out," the little guy confirmed. "Get the prisoners to safety. We'll continue the mission. Sovek Yad Chia."

"Yad Chia Kalia, first," the rifleman replied. He nodded to his friend, and the two of them ran off towards the other prisoners, started waving them to safety.

"Let's go," the little guy said.

"Wait!" I'd seen something in the courtyard that I knew how to use. "Hang on, let's take this."

There was blood on the front seat of the hover-truck, and the driver's side door was gone, but the engine still worked, and the hover-pads were operational. "Good idea. Head west, towards the open prarie," the little guy said. "Six."

"On it." Six (if that was the big guy's name), laid Jenkins gently down on the truck bed and set up his big gun on the truck's tailgate. "Ready."

"Drive," the little guy said, climbing into the front passenger's seat. He rolled down the window and started shooting back at the pursuing Yor, as I put the truck into gear and started driving like a bat out of hell. Six laid down a lot of cover fire in the meantime, fast and wild, but weirdly accurate, boom boom boom boom boom.

We burst out of the city and onto the open grasslands, our truck skimming the grass like some sort of dragonfly or insect. "West," the little guy said, pulling back the hood of his ninja suit. "There are marshlands there."

"Woah woah woah, you want to go into a swamp! We won't last more than an hour with the water mucking up the hoverpads!" I protested.

"It'll be an hour during which we'll be going three times faster than the enemy. Hunter Killers don't handle wet or uneven ground well, and the treeline will protect us from aircraft. We'll ditch the truck and go on foot afterwards."

"Wait, you want to slog our way on foot through a swamp!? You're CRAZY--"

That's when I realized I'd been making an unjustified assumption the whole time.

She wasn't a very pretty girl, what with the huge burn scar running down the side of her face from her forehead to her chin, but she was definitely a girl. Now that I could get a closer look at her body up close, when she wasn't leaping around like some kind of monkey, I could see. . . well, let's just say I could see enough. "Are you going to look at the road or at me?" she asked challengingly. "Just drive."

"Yes, ma'am," I whispered, thunderstruck. "Ummm. . . do you have a name?"

"No name, no need. Call me One," she said curtly, pulling the hair tie from her high ponytail and letting her chin-length hair fall free.

"One. Gotcha." I gulped and stared straight ahead at where we were going. It seemed the safest thing to do for several reasons.

*****

Tired now. I'll tell the rest of the story later.

Steve
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that's what I'm talking about!

Sorry to see Jenkins go though.
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I think I know what they mean by the "TEER KWAN" but I don't want to ruin the story.

  
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themocaw, this is some seriously good stuff.
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Great story so far, looking forward to reading more. Reads a lot like the original 'Starship Troopers'. Keep up the good work soldier
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Wow. Fraking bloodey hell. When can i buy the movie?????




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One question: do the Terrans have allies, or are they fighting the Yor alone?
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hey general. DONT ASK questions it will ruin the story its like skipping chapters to see what happend or will happen it ruins the story. got it.....
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February 25, 2229
Somewhere in a goddamn swamp on a backwater planet in the armpit of the galaxy.

Hovertruck broke down at last this morning. One whole night and most of a morning driving through swamps, and the hover pads finally overloaded and shorted out. We buried Jenkins the best we could: laid him in the front seat and pushes the truck into the swamp. Wish we could do more for him, but Graves Registration will just have to pick him up later after we capture the planet.

Whenever that is. I'm thinking it might never happen.

The Lentzlandians Campaign is. . . not going well, to say the least, from what I can see. Dropships have stopped falling, but the sky's thick with Yor Flitters: Hunter-Killers reconfigured with antigrav units. Air cover. They've got air superiority, we're stuck on the ground with them.

It wouldn't be so bad if I weren't stuck on the ground with the Yor and a couple of absolute weirdo ninja-soldiers. Six is bad enough: he's ridiculously huge, and he doesn't say anything worth writing down, but he's at least human. One, I'm not even sure of that. The girl doesn't walk so much as lope or stalk, and I've never seen anyone sit so still in my entire life for so long. Sometimes I don't think she even breathes.

Example: the swamp has these leeches, and those are another story altogether: they're big and slimy and they've got these rainbow colors all over them that would be pretty if they weren't latching onto you and sucking your blood. First time I saw one of them latched onto my arm I freaked out and started tugging on it. "Don't," she said, grabbing my wrist. "It'll break apart. Cause infection."

"Shit, then what do I do?"

"Nothing. There aren't enough to cause you permanent harm, and they'll fall off once they've had enough to drink."

"What if it gets infected?"

"It won't. They secrete an antibiotic." And that was that. No ewww squick, just "oh well."

The weirdest part, though, is when they talk to each other. They don't speak Standard English from what I can hear, it sounds more like Chinese or German crossed with one of those clicky African languages and whistling. That's right, whistling. "Sora Yan Thath," Six will say. "Yali," One will reply. "Sor," Six will say. "What was that?" I'll ask. "Six says that there are seventeen Yor Flitters up ahead and we should head towards the east to avoid them. I suggested we go northwest instead, and he suggested we take it slow and quiet," One will translate. I'm not sure if they're bullshitting me or if that's really what they're saying.

At one point, I heard Six mention something like, "Sei Teer Kwan," and my ears perked up like a fox's. "Teer Kwan, what the heck is a Teer Kwan?" I asked.

That brought them both to a halt. "What do you know about Teer Kwan?" One asked, and I couldn't help notice how her hand was getting closer to her holstered plasma pistol.

"Nothing," I said slowly and calmly, "It's just the Yor kept asking about it. Where is the Teer Kwan, what is the Teer Kwan, what do you know about it. Considering that they kept asking about it and killed a bunch of us to try and find out more, I thought it might be a little important, maybe."

"It's nothing," One said, taking her hand off her pistol. "I've never heard of such a thing."

Yeah, pull the other one, it's got bells on it. "You're a lousy liar," I said flatly. "And considering I've just been through absolute hell these past twenty four hours, I think I deserve an explanation."

Six pulled out a big freakin' knife and pointed it at my throat. "We tell you, we have to kill you," he said bluntly.

"All right, then I'll tell you," I said. "You know what I think? I think it's got something to do with you two weirdoes, and how One here can dodge bullets and shoot a gun in each hand while diving through an open window and get headshots each time. I think it's got something to do with how Six can pick up a crew-served heavy repeater and pick it up like a toothpick, and make every shot hit while firing full-auto. I think the Yor found out something about that and they want it for themselves and that's why they dissected ten of my fellow marines to try and find out more about it. Am I close?"

Stupid of me. Six clocked me on the side of the head with the hilt of his knife and stab the big pig-sticker down at me. I saw One kick his wrist and knock the knife out of his hand: it landed, point down, an inch from the side of my head. The two of them started jabbering in that weird language of theirs. Six was obviously pissed and kept making throat-cutting gestures in my general direction, but One was obviously more pissed and kept snapping one phrase back at him over and over "Sovek Yad Chia. Sovek Yad Chia." Finally, Six backed down and went into parade rest. "Yad Chia Kalia," he said, and walked off into the swamp looking mad and annoyed.

"What did you tell him?" I asked. My hand wouldn't stop shaking, and I had a feeling I'd need a change of underwear.

"What he needed to hear," One said cryptically. "Come on, let's take a walk."

*****

"What do you know about the Arceans?" One asked, as we walked on through the swamp.

"Big, green guys. Got crazy dredlocks. They're a 'proud warrior race,' which I think translates to 'assholes.'"

"Not completely inaccurate," One said flatly. "Go on,"

"They're also getting their asses handed to them by the Yor. Totally stampeded. Word is they've lost all their colony worlds, they're reduced to space nomads now."

"It was because they were the first race to recognize the Yor as a threat, after the Iconians were wiped out," One explained. "By that time, however, it was too late for them. The Yor fleet was simply too powerful, and the Yor themselves were too numerous. Apparently, the Yor homeworld contains several Precursor ruins, including manufacturing sites, which gives them an incredible edge in the field of starship production. Arcean ships were better, and they killed Yor ships of similar size and class three-to-one. But the Yor could build five ships for every Arcean ship.

"The Arceans, being a 'proud warrior race,' as you said, came to a conclusion that their own destruction would not be in vain if the seeds of future Yor downfall could be planted in the short time they had remaining," One went on. "Their scientists shifted their focus to a plan of action that could destroy the Yor, even if the Arceans themselves could not put it into action. What they came up with was in a way, simplicity itself.

"The Yor, despite all their sophistication, are machines," One explained, "and as machines they suffer from several exploitable flaws. The first is that their method of decision-making is analytical. Humans don't work that way. A ball-player doesn't calculate out the trajectory of a baseball and its estimated speed and course of action in his head. He just runs out there and catches the ball. Pattern Recognition, adjusted for the current situation. Less accurate, but faster, and it has the advantage that it can be quickly adjusted and recalibrated for situations that have not been encountered. A Yor needs to rewrite its decision tree and establish a new parameter. They can do it fast, but it usually needs a split second to integrate and optimize that new parameter, and we can exploit that time delay in the meanwhile.

"Secondly, the Yor don't form individual attachments." One brushed a lock of hair back from her face, fingering the burn scar on her forehead. "To the Yor, one Yor is the same as any other, designated only by their serial number. N-1. X-17. Just one of billions. A Yor does not fight to defend its own existence or the existence of its companions, only to complete the mission."

"This means that Yor ground combat tactics are, in a sense, completely brute-force," One concluded. "They don't value the lives of their soldiers, and they don't anticipate change well. So they will continue to use the mass assault combat tactic: throwing billions of Hunter-Killers into a battle and winning in a war of attrition."

"I don't see how they're much different from us in that regard," I muttered, thinking of Jenkins.

"Then you should be dead right now. The Yor don't rescue prisoners," One said bluntly.

"Whatever. . . look, this still doesn't explain why you and Six have magic powers."

"I'm getting there," One said. "With this realization, the Arceans understood that the Yor could be defeated by taking advantage of the two characteristics biological life has that mechanical life doesn't: intuition and individual attachment. Even a Thalan Queen will protect the members of her own brood over those of another. The Yor don't even form those attachments: to them, life is divided between Yor and fleshlings. So they shifted their research focus to individual combat: ground troops, Marine forces, planetary bombardment strategies. And they stumbled across something they didn't expect."

"Teer Kwan?"

"Tir-Quan, actually. Shorter vowels, roll the R, the Q sound is less harsh, more delicate. . . not that you'd probably notice the difference," One said dismissively. "It was apparently a Precursor infantry training system. It's derived from their words for the numbers 'one' and 'one million,' roughly translates to 'one warrior is worth one million soldiers.' It's what caused us so much trouble during the Dread Lords incident: their technology was far superior, yes, but it was also Tir-Quan training that gave them that vicious ten million-to-one kill ratio in ground combat."

"How does that help us? We don't have doom ray rifles or. . ."

"Irrelevant. The training is mostly mental, learning to anticipate future events before they occur, tapping emotional and physical resources to their utmost, maintaining superior tactical positioning and readjusting tactics within an instant's time," One said. "The first principle of Tir-Quan roughly translates: 'The beam is the extension of the gun, the gun is the extension of the hand/tentacle/claw/pseudopod, the appendage is the extension of the body, the body is an extension of the mind. All combat begins in the mind.' Tir-Quan is just an application of that concept."

"So basically, the Arceans developed a super infantry-training system. . . all right. Why didn't it save them?"

"They were too late. By the time they had understood the concept, the Yor were already invading their core worlds," One explained. "So they did what 'proud warrior races' do: they turned over all their information to another species who was also threatened by the Yor. Not the Altarians, who were next on the list for Yor conquest, but the Terrans, who were second on the list, to give them more time to construct and establish the Tir-Quan training center before the Yor arrived."

"It didn't work that way, though. Somehow the Yor figured out the existence of Tir-Quan, and now they want it for themselves. I don't know if they'll be able to adapt it for their own uses, or if they just want to keep it away from the other interstellar races, but the fact that they want it so badly is. . . problematic for us," One concluded. "They want it badly enough that they were willing to set a trap for us to do it."

"A trap?"

"We led the attack on the Hyperion Shrinker, the one that General Warren wanted so badly. It is indeed a Precursor-technology center, but indications are it's only been online for a week or two. Perhaps it was started right after the Yor determined our destination, while we were pushing through their interdiction field." One's eyes were grim and flat. "It's certainly not been online long enough to actually be used. It was bait for a trap, to tempt General Warren into committing his troops to a ground assault instead of using planetary bombardment, to give the Yor the greatest chance of capturing a Tir-Quan warrior alive and discovering the location of the Tir-Quan center. It was a trap," she repeated, "and we're in it right now."
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*stands up and applauds*
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hey general. DONT ASK questions it will ruin the story its like skipping chapters to see what happend or will happen it ruins the story. got it.....


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Freakin' amaaaaaaaaaazing story dude! Keep up the work that is better then good!

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Sir, you impress me.


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Don't give Homsar a hard time, guys. Feel free to ask questions, just don't expect answers