The Terran Federation I

..... A new dawn has sprang up all over Earth. Earth has finally recovered from the unification wars. Now, most of the governments have come together in New United Nations. It was a brillant move created by then super diplomat Thomas Serak, who later became its first President...

... Thomas Serak was looking over his status reports after spending almost a year creating the government. A lot had happened over the last year. Earth now had three ships, a Space Miner called the Free Enterprise, a new Colony ship, and The state of the art survey cruiser. Ironically, the chief scientist, Archer, had made some major breakthroughs when he designed the ship but has recently just passed away.

... The death of Dr. Archer was a major blow, but the "scientist" who assisted him was very jealous and deleted as much info on the new Survey Cruiser Uss Bonaventure as he could. The ass't "scientist is under charge of treason and could face the death penalty (and his name isn't used in polite society.)

... The Bonaventure is captained by Dr. Archers son Jonathan.
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1 Jan. 2226,

... Serak looks over his reports ...

Status Reports,

* Earth *
... The the new Manufacturing center built on top of an excavated precursor site has yielded inpressive results. The next major project is to complete the new Science Lab the is being built near an ancient archiological site. (that should make the scientists happy, the senate choose it to be the next rush job.)

* Ships *
** USS Free Enterprise sent to construct Mining Station 1*
** the Colony Ship (can't find a good name for it.) is being sent towards Alpha Centauri.
** The Bonaventure is on its way outside to solar system. (P.S. the inability to build another Bonaventure class still irks me.)

* Shipyard *
** build lots of colony ships!!!
** new ship estimated in 9 weeks

* Econony *
** Taxes: 49%, Revenue: 39BC
** Spending: 90% of capacity, 44 bc
** Spying 1 BC
Net Income: -5 BC

Approval: 77%

* Research *
Some of Archers notes were found. Allowing the Engine program procede to reaquire stage II.
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Archer's Log,

1 Jan. 2226,

..... I can't begin to describe my feelings about being given command of the Bonaventure. It really is disappointing that this will be the only survey ship for awhile, but I have the best crew in the new United Nations Deep Space Probe Ageny or UNDSPA (which the initials sounds retarded.) I just call it Starfleet.

8 Jan. 2226,

..... Well as we are about to leave the Sol system we get a blip on our sensors. It turns out to have been the wreckage of an "ancient" but powerful ship. The chief science officer says it is full of precious elements, that we can use to modify the ships hull. But still it gives you chills and thrills that we are probably not alone in the galaxy.


President's Log,

8 Jan. 2226,

Captain Archer's report on the alien vessel sent shock waves through the Senate's UNDSPA oversite commitee. They tried to keep the news quiet but it was leaked to press... and a mixture of emotions and opinions surfaced.

... I had to make a speach before the world expressing a new dawn in the era of space exploration has begun.

... reality was many members of the senate wanted to recall the colony ship and consider our place in the universe and if we were better of not knowing. Then there were others who were quite excited. The Arms Union were licking there chops. There was a call to create a true starfleet, but those resources aren't available yet.

... On a related note Approval dropped to 76%
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Archer' log.

15 Jan. 2226,

... Well, we finally made it out of the system. As it turns out Earth is near the edge of a cluster, I call it a corner. So, after the previous encounter, we headed "east" and found another ship wreckage.

... Then our ships sensors finally picked up the outskirts of a new system. It is too early to tell if there is any good planets.

Presidents Log.

15 Jan. 2226,

The lab is built. Next is another lab, followed by 2 market centers.

The shock is starting was starting to where off until Archer found another wreck. Speculation continues.
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Archer's Log,

22 Jan. 2226,

We entered the new system, it was given the designation Nyquist's Star. It was named after our Astrophysics officer.

1 Feb. 2226,

After surveying Nyquist's Star, we found an interesting planet. It was a Class IV Toxic world. Poor Lt. Nyquist, after word reached home about the new world, but couldn't be colonized, detractors started calling it Niquil world because of the so called boring news.

President's Log.

1 Feb. 2226

*Research report *

We are now on our way to getting back to Ion Engines.

*Note* (Niquil World, now thats funny.)

Word from the colony ship is Alpha Centauri is a bust. The captain is being put on report. It seems he only stopped once and found a Class IX Toxic planet but didn't survey the system. When asked why not?. He figured it was best to leave in a hurry because he didn't want a reprutation like Lt. Nyquist on the Bonaventure.
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Keep going, pleeze! I'm all ears ... (well, not really. I did get stuffed in a paper bag as a child tho  ) You have at least one Fan!
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Archer's log.

8 Feb. 2226
... Picking up long range scans of a system nicknamed Romulus Star System. It has 2 plamets, Romulas and Remus. Both are unihabitable.

15 Feb. 2226
... Finished scans of Romulas and leaving Niquist.

1 Mar. 2226
... Excellent news. Received word that the new Ion Engines are ready to be tested.

Colony Ship Log.

8 Feb. 2226
... Reached system Freya. I guess I will have to spend a lot more time in this system. I realize the fact that more survey ships aren't available.... But I'm not on a survey ship. I told the Admiral so.

15 Feb. 2226
... Found two habitable planets. Freya II, Class 9, Aquatic, not yet ready for colonization. Freya V, class 5, is ready, but too small moving on.

1 Mar. 2226
... Orders changed. Stay put and await Ion Engine upgrade. Hurray.

Presidents Log.

8 Feb. 2226
... the backlash against Captain "I'm not a survey ship" Mcgee continues. Awaiting UNDSPA's report.

15 Feb. 2226
... Admiral Forrest has come to see me about Mcgee and complaints from Colonization and Transport.

... I told him that I thought the matter was closed. Until we are able to build moe survey ships they will have to pick up the slack. They have people to make proper surveys. Admiral Forrest said I will tell them again.

1 Mar. 2225
... Admiral Forrest was very happy. The new Ion ship Engines are ready. He said luckily they were able to catch the shipyard department with the modifications in time.

* Research Note *
** Do to Captain Archer's great survey skills, the senate choose to spend research spending on upgrading lab tech.
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ElWhopO,

... Thank you so much. It is my first attempt at an AAR.
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Colony Ship 1 Log.
8 Mar. 2226
... Finally able to Move again. These new Ion Engins makes us as fast as the Bonaventure. I wonder if Archer will race me.

15 Mar. 2226
... We reached a new system, designated Raphael.

22 Mar. 2226
... While surveying Raphael, we hit paydirt. Raphael II is awesome. At first I wasn't so positive. It is a Class 7 after all. But the brass wants a complete survey, so I will humor them...

... While I was on the bridge waiting for scouting reports... then it came...

... "Lt. Commander Kohlhaas to Captain McGee, 'Sir, you wont believe what we found?'"

... "Captain McGee here, Speak up man."

... "We found the mineral mother load down here. If geologicals estimates are correct, then we are looking at a 300% increase in production here."

... "Very good commander. very good indeed. Anything else?"

... "Yes sir, Lt. Yamaguchi found some ancient ruins. says they are breathtaking."

... So, I radioed back to Admiral Forrest and He said proceed with settlement.

1 April 2226
... Boy word spread like wildfire. Crews were send very quickly to set up a manufactoring ceter and it went up quick.

... Mixed news I'm afraid. I figured I would get a new ship. I was wrong since we have to use the ship as a base, I will be stationed here as military govenor. But I will be promoted to Base Commodore. And Lt. Commander Kohlhaas for his brilliant discover is being promoted to Commander and first officer.

... Oh I forgot to mention, we renamed this colony Andoria. Because it is a water world with blue skinned natives. I get to deal with them.
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Colony Ship 2 Log.

8 Mar. 2226

... Captain lewis reporting. Well, we launched without a hitch. I'm glad for the command, but please, a colony ship? Admiral Forrest said be glad. I suppose it could be worse. When I entered command school, I was trained for survey duty. Adm, Forrest says the circumstances aren't ideal, but I get to command and survey systems until we find a good planet.

15 Mar. 2226

... Not much to report.

22 Mar. 2226

... We are heading in the general direction of the first Colony ship. I've desided to vere off course a little. call it a hunch. And what do you know I find a system.

... Now the brass is keeping a catalogue of stars, for their upcoming cartography department. They designated this star, get this, Gounaroplous. Huh? I told Adm. Forrest surely he was kidding. He said, unfortuneately no. It is named after to head of the Astronomy dept. in Greece. (I will call it G Star.)

1 April 2226

... April fools day.

... I thought it was joke when I heard Captain McGee finally found something. Good for him. Hopefully I will find something quick.

... Wow. Captain McGee got promoted. With my luck I wont be so lucky.

... Sensors picked up a planet in G Star, G3 Class 4, Toxic. Moving on.
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Free Enterprise Log.

Commander Mudd reporting.

1 April 2226,

... You know this has been an interesting gig. All I have to do is get this to different parts of the asteroid fiend and set up mining bases. And the brass doesn't call too much. Well, I finally heard from Adm. Forrest. he says as soon as we finish with the base we are getting new engines. Because, after we get finished with the sol system, we get to go look for more asteroids. i hope the Bonaventure finds some soon. Can we say needle in a haystack?

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USS Bonaventure Log.

8 Mar. 2226

... Well, we have been traveling through a lot of empty space. Until we made an interesting discovery. We ran across another ship dead in space. It was damaged but it was carrying an estimated 100 BC worth of artifacts and data.

1 April 2226

... I'm really beginning to get curious abou this part of space. What the hell happened out here anyway. We stumbled across another ship drifting in space. I don't always go along on away missions but I desided to go on this one.

... And wow what a ship. I'm hoping they get that universal translator thing working soon but I won't hold my breath. My guess based on the marking is that this is some sort of Royal Escort. Can't read the logs so, I'm have to send them back.

... It is a very nice vessel. I was amazed that the cargo hold was still intact. I would estimate it's value at 500 bc. I still can't tell how old it is.
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great stuff. keep it comming!     
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... President Thomas Serak was sitting in his presidential office evaluating his last four months in office.

Thomas Serak, Personal Log.

1 April 2226

... Things seemed to be going very smoothly. We now have a new extra solar colony. Which are starting to excite alot of people still scared from war. Unfortunately with colonies come great responsibilities.

... The Senate thought it was a good idea to set up new training centers. Anything to waste money. But I have to admit we have no choice. But the fight still continues over whether to train people here or on the new colonies.

... Another problem with colonies are the huge drain on the budget. We just hope a solution can be reached before the colonies become self sufficient. We really don't need separatists ruining things.

... Except for some grumbling UNDSPA is doing a great job. But those derelic ships Archer has found are disturbing. So a think tank has been formed. The idea is to prepare for the notion that we are not alone as seen on Andoria. It took too long to communicate those people. So, we need a Universal translator.

... Another issue being discussed is how much should be put into weapons development. The military wants armed survey ships and complain that our state of the art balistic missile just don't work well. they are too slow and take too long to hit the target. With so many things needing to be developed, weary is the head that holds the crown.

* Progress Reports *

1 April 2226

Tax Rate..... 49% ..... Revenue ..... 52 BC
Spending..... 90% ..... Spending ... -84 BC
Espionage .......................... - 1 BC
Net ................................ -32 BC

Approval Rating ..... 76%

Personal Log Supplimental

... Progress reports look good. While I'm told the treasury is strong. I still haven't seen the reports. I'm being stonewalled.
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Colony Ship 2 Log.

15 April 2226

... We come across a new solar system, designated Umera (Who comes up with these names.) Anyway, the only thing of value are some asteroids we found. moving on.

1 May 2226

... We come to a new system, designated Vanga, No planets.
... (Suplemental: I remember my Astronomy classes, Why can't we use those names?)

15 May 2226

... We found Artemis Star
... We heard last week that our new sister ship Colony 3 was completed and launched.

22 May 2226

... New System, Lares found.

1 June 2226

... found another planet, Lares I (Class 8). Ordered to investigate and if good settle.

8 July 2226

... Jackpot. We have a winner. Survey parties found a huge cash of research and two ancient settlements. We proceded to settle.

... Well, it happened to me, I'm now Commodore of Lares I, or until I find a better name, Ha ha.

15 July 2226

... Well we finally got that lab done. The Chief Science officer says it boosted estimates of value by +300%



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Colony Ship 3 Log.

1 July 2226

... After about nine weeks since launch, I was getting pretty bored. I'm glad Captain Lewis, I mean Commodore Lewis, found Lares. But we finally found ourselves a system, Patroklos (I guess they had to make the Russians happy.)

... Pat I is a Class 5, Aquatic
... Pat II is class 12, Toxic

... ever forward.

Free Enterprise Log.

Captain Mudd Reporting.

8 April 2226

... We finally finished Mining Base 2. Advanced Asteroid surveys believe we can get one more base built. I have to admire those crews ... they deserve every penny of their hazard pay.

22 April 2226

... Well our orders have come through. After we get done with Mining Base 3, procede to the Umers system.

Bonaventure Log.

Captain Log.

8 May 2226

... After spending many weeks finding only a couple of interesting things, we found anouther abandoned ship. Brass says it was worth 250 BC.

Captain's Personal Log.

15 June 2226

... Well another Captain got promoted to Commodore. I'm not sure How I feel about it. Admiral Forrest says don't worry about it. I am in Starfleet. Commodores McGee and Lewis are in Colonization. The future is very bright for me. I say, Uh-Huh.
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... Well President Serak gets some bad news.

1 July 2226,

... Admiral Forrest came into my office not long ago fuming mad at the Senate. It seems all the various special interest commitees have been spending money on pet projests. That they will know next month what the true budget will be.

... It seems everything is messed up. We have two Colony Ships that were completed very quietly, and never launched. I was told red tape. Quietly though, The brass had a major part in it. Admiral Forrest admitted that no one could make up their minds where to go. I asked flipantly, what about Mars or Venus.

... He got serious, "Sir, if we colonize those Class 4 planets, then it will slow down our ability to colonize nicer planets later.

... In the meantime Admiral take your best guess and send them out.

... Sir, the new sensors are almost ready and I have an idea.

... Go ahead Admiral...

... What if we make a few makeshift survey ships out of the proposed freighter hulls. It won't be ideal, but a stopgape measure. And I propose using Andoria's shipyard when its completed. It will also let up train up some good crews for them.

... Alright, but make sure they are very careful out there. Those hulls will be cheap and the equipment expensive. that will be all admiral.

... Yes Sir.
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... President Sarek gets more reports,

8 July 2226

... Admiral of the Fleet Forrest came into the office to make his report.

... "Admiral Forrest, I do hope you have good news this week."

... "Well yes sir I do. The Free enterprise has made it to Umera. Archer reports that he is passing through Gandalf, but it doesn't seem to have any useful planets. R&D says it should have the basics down on Galactic Warfare for the simulators. "

... "And Commodore McGee said the new plans for the Auxilery Survey ships are ready. He doesn't like to call them cruisers. But said the shipyard will have the first one finished in 17 weeks."

... "seventeen weeks." *whistles* "Well, I guess that can't be helped. What do you plan to call the new class?", asked the president.

... "I'll try to get the ship quicker, but I wont hold my breath. A good PR move would be to let the school kids deside."

... "Excellant, Good job, Forrest."
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* Newsflash *

15 July 2226

... "This is Daniel Osterloh reporting. News had spread fast as President Sarek has revealed that we have partially recovered from the day of imfany. The day the terrorists try to stop our destiny in exploring the stars. And in a brilliant Political move he has desided to let the worlds children decide on the new name of the forthcoming Auxilery Survey Ship."

... "The president has been critized over its design. But the presind assures that the Auxilery Survey Ship (A.S.S. for short) is as fast as the USS Bonaventure and can "see" as far, it just isn't as advanced yet."

... " I tried to reach Captain Archer for comment. But a representative from UNDSPA says the captain is pleased."
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Captain Archer's Personal Log Suplimental.

22 July 2226

... Space is an interesting place. It is many fully of boring routine with the occasional spurt of excitement. I've had a couple of weeks to think about the Aux Survey Ship. The press I hear had a field with its initials. Poor Commodore McGee. I'm not sure he will ever get out of the doghouse.

... From what I understand, they had a smaller design planned but the mass of a second Ion engine was too much. So, they were forced to try the Freighter hull. It isn't ideal. if it gets into trouble it isn't very sturdy. But it does the job with speed and sensors.
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newsflash

it has been reported by government insiders.

that the treasury is so bad becouse of spending throught the senate. that it is bleeding red.

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8 July 2226

President Serak sits at his desk with Adm Forrest and the Econ Secretary.

... "Well gentlemen, I finally got a little better report info...

* Tax: 498%, Revenue: 63 BC
* Spending 90%, for -140 Bc
* Spying: 1BC
*net -76 BC

*Approval is a healthy 76%

* Population: 9.935 B

* Treasury: 3257 BC

... "How is the Navy?"

... "We're doing fine. The red tape has loosened. And Colony and transport Dept. says things couldn't be smoother. Although I think the pace has caught many of them off guard."

... "Thank you Adm. How about Economics?"

... "Mr. President I do apologize for my department lack of info until now. But careful analysis over the last 7 months has shown a treasury deficite of nearly 1750 bc. we're holding but it needs monitoring.

... "Excuse me Mr. President." Adm. Forrest cut in. "Captain Archer has picked up signs of a huge planet that might be useful. requests C&T check it out."
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* Break from story *

"Okay gang, how is the epic?", Flash
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It reads preety good ... you want an honest opinion? I was a little put off by the spacing, but that's ok. The inserting of information that might be useful for others while playing their games is an attraction. lot's of reading required to sift it out, IMHO. Longer posts/fewer total might be something to think about.

Some aar's also insert screenshots to illustrate a particular event, right from the game play. I dunno if an image host is required for that but I think so. It would be something interesting to do, anyway, while your creativity percolates along.

Keep it coming! I'm reading it if no one else is.   
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Thanks ElWhopO,

I've been thinking about putting in some map shots. I just don't know how on this board.

Sorry about the spacing, it helps to keep things organized. I'm glad you like it. I need the writing practice. I need to write a lot of papers for school. (loosy liberal Arts)
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* 6 Months Later, 1 Jan 2227 *

... It has been a busy year indeed. and the president looks over his reports with his staff and Adm. Forrest.
... "Well, gentlemen, this has been an amazing year. We have placed 5 colonies with five more on the way."
... Economic Secrety Gates was adressed next. "Gates how are the econ numbers?"
... Fearing the question, Bill took a deep breath. "Well, they look like this..."

* Yearly Ending Report *
* Tax: 49%, Revenue: 118 BC
* Spe: 90%, Spending: -208 BC
* Espionage: -1 Bc
* Tourism: +2 BC
*Net: - 85 Bc/ week

* Approval 76%
* Pop: 13.225 b
* treasury: 762 BC

... "Sir we can't keep up this pace."
... "What do you suggest?"
... Bill thought it over. "Let's suspend the colonization program until get results from the last five colony ships. and balance the budget for another quarter. Let's focus earth's social production so we can get the Manufactioning capital done. I estimate will be done in 8 weeks."
... "How much revenue we have left?"
... "About 2 BC/week."
... "Make it so."

... "Admiral Forrest report."
... "Fleet stands at one Survey Cruiser, two Aux. Survey Ships, and five colony ships. I guess we are taking Earth's shipyard offline. Andoria has switched to building a updated Constructor."
... "Anything else Admiral?"
... "Since Captain Archer made First contact with the Orions a few weeks back, it has made a lot of people very nervous. Some would like to build some defense craft."

... "Science Secretary Hawkins, do we have the technology?"
... "bearly. We have basic Space weapon tech with a Defender design. Unfortuneately we just don't have the resources. besides with our farflung colonies, it would just be too slow moving them around. So in the meantime we are looking into studying Diplomatic Relations."

*Break*
Tech progression as follows: New Engine propulsion, Ion Engines, Xeno Labs, Stellar Cartography, Universal Translators, Galactic Warfare, Space militarization, Xeno Biology, Planetary Improvements, Xeno Economics, Advanced Computing, Basic Miniturization, Xeno Industrial, Space Weapons, working Diplomatic Relations

... "Okay, how is Bevora V doing?"
... Hawkins replied, "Well, just great. it seems the the nickname Terra has stuck. It is Class 26 with a precursor Library on it and some cultural ruins on it. I suggest when practical that we make it the Technological center."