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For Gondacor!

For Gondacor!

This is my second AAR, and my first with DA. Since my first one went fairly well, I decieded to give it another go. Since this is the first installment, it is mainly background story, hopefully this one will turn our great. So for your reading enjoyment I present "For Gondacor!"
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For Gondacor!
"A New Beginning"

The world was tearing itself apart, explosion after explosion rocked the cities of Gondacor, as powerful nuclear blasts set most the major cites of the planet ablaze. For many they believed it was the end, that the great apocalypse was upon them. All around them it seemed that the enemies were closing in, that the Gondacor Federation, was being pushed back by the Chelsyrian Alliance. For as long as anyone could remember the planet Gondacor had been split into two, the evil vile Chelsyrian Alliance on one side, and the noble Gondacor Federation on the other. Back and forth the two would quarrel, vying for dominance of the planet, until the great discovery. No one knew for sure what was actually found, but there were rumors that it was some kind of alien vessel, the problem was it was found on Federation soil.

The Chelsyrian Alliance, growing evermore suspicious of what was found, mounted an operation to steal the find, and were successful. The Gondacor Federation was outraged by the operation, but since they were concealing the find, they had no way to pressure the Alliance to return it. So the matter was brushed under the rug and forgotten for almost fifty years, but then the war began.

It was a sudden attack form the Chelsyrian Alliance, using nuclear warheads they struck major cities around the Gondacor Federation. They believed if they struck fast the Federation would fall, but that was not to be, and to the surprise of the Chelsyrians, the Federation struck back with equal furry. With the nuclear exchange, the world began to rip and tear itself apart, and when all seemed lost for the Federation, the Chelsyrians vanished, leaving no one behind.

Why and how the Chelsyrians vanished was the greatest mystery of the Gondacor people, but for now they were just happy they were gone. With their exit, the Gondacor Federation worked to rebuild their now destroyed world, and slowly Gondacor was rebuilt to its original splendor, only this time united under the Gondacor Federation. With the Gondacor united, the horrors of the war slowly faded into the past, and time slipped by, and the Gondacor people progressed. When nearly a thousand years had passed, few could recall the horrors of the Great War, for they were only stories now told to children, that had faded into myth.

It was the dawn of the year 2225, and the newly elected President Zocar, prepared to give his address to the Gondacor Federation people. President Zocar was a young Gondacorian, with strong idealist views, he was very intelligent, but very stubborn. Now after a hard fought election, he prepared to lead the Gondacor Federation to new heights.
"My fellow Gondacorians, today we are stronger than ever, and with me as your newly elected president I promise to make us even stronger! My hope is to bring stronger unity to our people, and help those that are still poverty stricken make it in our great Federation. I will be working with the Federation Council to push through some of my new initiatives to reform our education system, and overhaul our space agency. I thank you for your support, and I hope to represent you well! Thank You."

Little did President Zocar know, but his presidency was quickly going to turn into something he could not have anticipated. The day after his speech to the Federation, the fateful day came. It was a picture perfect day, the sky was a shallow cool blue, with just a few fluffy clouds passing by, a day no one would give a second thought about. Suddenly like lighting cutting the sky, a tremendous flame streaked across, darting towards the ground. With a deafening roar the objected collided with the ground, shaking the land for miles. The object had crashed into the middle of a farmers’ field, creating a huge crater were there had once been large fields of crops.

The object was tracked by the Gondacorian satellites, and the military was quick to respond. With the utmost speed the recovery team traveled out to the impact site, not knowing what they would find. To their surprise it was an intact vessel of some type, it appeared to have some damage but was remarkably in good shape. From what they could tell it, it was a space vehicle of some type, but they had no idea where it would have come from, so they sent it to the Gondacor Space Consortium. At the Consortium, the Gondacorian scientist studied the find with curious eyes, and quickly determined it was an alien vessel. The strange thing about it though, it didn’t appear to be finished, it seemed to be a prototype of some kind. After careful study, it was found that the ship was a prototype for a new engine, one that was capable of propelling a ship faster than light speed.

When word finally reached President Zocar of the discovery, he immediately saw this as a means to revamp the Gondacor Space Consortium. Zocar immediately ordered for the reverse engineering of the ship to study how the engines functioned, in order to make them useful for possible future Gondacorian ships. The scientist at the Consortium worked tirelessly around the clock, to figure that engine out, and after about a month of work they finally understood how it functioned. With the schematics the scientist and engineers drew out, it was now possible to reconstruct the engine, and put it to use for Gondacorian ships.

With plans ready to go, President Zocar quietly ordered for three ships to be constructed using the "Hyperdrive" engine, one a colony ship, another a survey ship, the GSS Gallant, and one a mining vessel. The construction proved difficult, but by the first of January, 2226, the vessels were completed. With the completing of the vessels, Zocar decided it was time to announce to the people of Gondacor of the great achievement, and of the new goals of exploration and colonization.
"People of Gondacor, this is a great day, for we have completed our first ships capable of traveling faster than the speed of light. With these new ships we will set out to explore and colonize the galaxy! For the first time in the history of Gondacor, people will set forth and spread throughout the galaxy."

With the conclusion of President Zocar’s speech, the first colony ship disembarked for the nearest planet in the Gondacor System, Alora. With the colonization of the first planet outside of Gondacor, the people now looked to the stars like they never before had.

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Reply #51 Top
screaming on the vid phone the head of the chelsyrian news(at least the head of it this week) agency Empress Surrelia,"how dare you offer so much in such a large bounty"

sorry maam i just thought that would help track down Loke and the publicity wouldn't hurt. After all you can just tax it away from whoever gets it later anyways.



Reply #52 Top
i hope you like these reactions
Reply #53 Top
I enjoy your reactions, it is nice to see what you are getting out of the story. I'm glad you are getting into the plot.   

Alex
Reply #56 Top
Hey Everyone! Sorry about my slow pace of installments, classes are really eating into my playing and writing time. I hope to have another installment out tomorrow or Monday, so be watching.   

Alex
Reply #57 Top
Well, as much as I want to keep reading, take care of your real life stuff first.
Reply #58 Top
This is GNN: Gondacorian News Network.

In other news, some Gondacorian troops have been puuled from service for maiacal dellusions, the most common being that the galaxy isn't real, just part of a story. It is belived these ludacris assumptions are a result of battle fatigue.  
Reply #59 Top
in the meantime the drengin emperior was seen banging on his television screen yelling"is anyone out there"

at the sametime on the computer screen of alexatticus could be heard banging
Reply #60 Top
On a darker note, there have been report of mass suicide of Chelsyrian civilians on planets captured by the Thalans. This is curently being investigated.
Reply #62 Top
In other news, we have recieived unconfirmed report that Miss Telari is not a spy, but a civilian. Also, Surrullia's advisor, Loke, is rumored to be with her. We will update this story as soon as we get more information. Until then, good night, and good luck.
Reply #63 Top
And for our last story today, looks like we have a breaking news item here... Yeah, apparently half of the galaxy has suddenly been taken over by some kind of, um, organization called the, um, the Jagged Knife.

You know I have a black belt, and I can use my hand like a knife, Veronica. No, really, watch closely. Hiiii-yaaah!

Ow! Oooohhhhh! Oh! Yeah, that's... this desk is really a lot harder than... Anybody got some ice?

Okay, that's the news for tonight. You stay classy, planet Earth. I'm Ron Burgundy.

[looks under news desk] This part is all metal, isn't it...
Reply #67 Top
*stupuid question*

When you invaded the Gabe system, what happened to the civilians? Were they wiped out, were they waving white flags, or did they run?
Reply #68 Top
I read in another thread that Alex recently finished his exams and vacated his dorm. Hopefully he will be back with more installments soon. Don't try to pick up the tumbleweeds - those things have thorns.



Spore. When you absolutely, positively got to kill every motherfrakker in the galaxy. Accept no substitutes.
Reply #69 Top
Yeah, spore is cool. Too bad the Gondacorians don't have it... or DO they???
Reply #70 Top
of course they do how do you think they can have as many babies as they do
Reply #72 Top
That is one heck of an AAR. Very cool! When will Chelsyria fall?

I just really want to tear that empress's throat out! Call me Lord Kona!

You should be an author Alex!

Etrius
Reply #73 Top
Its too bad alex abandoned this AAR. Such a good story.

-Scot
Reply #74 Top
May he did, maybe he didn't. We'll find out when/if he updates. Simple as that.


Super Diplomat. When you suck at warmongering, accept no substitutes.
Reply #75 Top
Yes I agree great read . You can feel the tension mounting . I have a feeling Gondacors gonna whoop some cheldryian butt heh!! Keep up the good work