Misspelling in Story in Databanks

The Drengin Menace - "...and their willingness to use that capability far more ruthless fashion than the Drengin thought possible."

Should probably read, "and their willingness to use that capability in a far more ruthless fashion than the Drengin thought possible."

10 Years Have Passed - "The Arcean home world has been sterilized by massive Drengin orbital bombardment The Korx are gone."

There needs to be a period between "bombardment" and "The Korx are gone.".

Making it, "The Arcean home world has been sterilized by massive Drengin orbital bombardment. The Korx are gone."

Alterian Prophecy - "...and DNA tests showed that they were the essentially the same species..."

Remove the first "the" so it reads, "...and DNA tests showed that they were essentially the same species..."

Thanks chuck1es, I'll get these taken care of.

Thank ya!

Please don't think I'm bein' pissy. Jars me outta the story and I want everyone to read 'em in euphoric wonder.

Oh I'm not mad -- I appreciate your help. They should all be fixed now. Please do point out any other errors you see.

ABIESSENEEEEEEERRRRRR!!!!

My dander is all up in yo' grill again, homeslice!

TERRAN ALLIANCE

Fourth paragraph, first sentence - "However, the stargate plans gave scientists a better understand of how folding space worked."

ICONIAN REFUGE

Second paragraph, fifth line: "...and encouraged the synthetic beings an uprising against the Iconians."

To an uprising? I dunno, it just doesn't read well to me.

Maybe: "...and encouraged the synthetic beings to rise against the Iconians."

TORIAN CONFEDERATION

Fourth paragraph, second line: "...and learned how strike back at their conquerors."