"subterfuge" new blind

Hi since i wasnt online for a long time i started observing the forums before i had a look at the current skin section.
And i stumbled over your thread and gave it a shot.

The overall idea is good but thats about it.
You have great potential but you waste it all when you chop and slay graphics together.
And im only posting this comment because probably no one else would dare, my critic is just to help you do better.
The startmenu animation should loop only once since the ship is looking od and the exhaust looks like some sort of contraceptive hanging on it.

You should have worked more on it i think.
You give me the overall feeling that you did 25% of the skin while the rest that actually looks a bit more detailed is from somewhere else.
Im "not" saying that you stole it from around the corner i just say that it does not fit with the rest of the skin.

There is many things that look well designed like the explorer background, but it doesnt fit the rest that looks chopped in your skin.
Did you made the skyscraper´s in the startmenu ? If not- that´s something you should lay your hands off from now on and try to use your own crafted buildings or graphics that u use, it will fit the rest of your work more and you will create a more complete fitting look.
The min max and close button look nice.
The window frames look like there is a margin problem.
The signs do not really fit the theme skycaptain, Btw do you even know what they mean ?
The colors choosen are good.

Thats about it, i would like to see some more in future but with more DETAIL to it.
This is by far not your best, and im sure you can do much better.

bk

He's on his beginning...

...time will give him skill!

I appreciate The input from "bk33..." And He´s RIGHT...... I do it (not xactly, but) like he says... I t´s MY style, a style that is forming.

ALL graphics are my own,  -My 3d progs, Photographs taken, inscanned  scetches that I made or From scratch-Photoshop work.

"bk"´s completely on the spot !!...from his perspective, Not mine.

As I said I´m forming my own style and it is in progress, some allready seem 2 like it according 2 my downloadcount.

This was written from My perspective, NO disrespect intended. I want 2 pointout that I appreciate and respect "bk"s input the most.

Neo One Six  -stayhard

PS. The japanese signs are my own design like everything else, of course I know what they mean. All Programs: "Programs", on the skyscraper: "subterfuge". DS

plus on monte

plus on est critiqué

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Je comprends...