Zazimire Zazimire

A guru poem with a direction, check this out.

A guru poem with a direction, check this out.

                                                                Deep and Reaching Roots

As I start my post

I look for….

I reach out….

I give no opion

Of anything to say

I state my case

And everyone treats me like I’m gay

 

Maybe I should have had the cue

That Turning things around…

Takes deep and reaching roots

But from the first insult

I don’t know why,

Giving people the freedom to define

Only depresses me

 

I affirm my directions a million times a day

But not getting them to paper….

I affirm my Logic

I affirm my ways

But only a Percent make it to page

 

If you felt you understood a song

And wanted it to play

And hit the button

And the feeling went away

Hitting play was an affirmation to god

That you gave it your best today!

-Jeremy Sr.

I AM ADDING THIS : IF YOU WOULD LIKE FRIENDSHIP AND/OR POETRY CLICK MY NAME AND SEND ME A PRIVATE MESSAGE PLEASE TELL ME THE TYPE OF POEM YOU ARE LOOKING FOR (LOVE, INTELLIGENT, STORYS BOTH FANTASY AND LIFE'S) JUST GIVE ME SOME IDEA WHAT YOUR UP TOO.

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Reply #51 Top

Jafo is plural!!!  Hey Jafs!!   :grin: :-"   ;)

Reply #52 Top

This feels a bit like cripple kicking...

This little fella is obviously in his first stage of beta...

Let's give hime a little technical support!

O.k., I'll start...

#1. IF you insist on writing ridiculous "poetry on gaming forums, will you at LEAST use spell checker? (pet peeve)

Reply #53 Top

This feels a bit like cripple kicking...