Demigod Ideas: Xinex the protector

Name: Xinex

Type: Assasin, Forces of Darkness

 

Appearance:

Large human form, that looks like he is covered in a black/dark blue oily substance, 2 large white war stripes where his eyes should be and an over sized mouth. Xinex is a biological liquid silicon being, his arms, legs and torso can change shape as he walks and attacks. He has no visible clothing as his body seems to be covered in living fibers that rap around his body like latex.

 

 

Pros: Fast attack, Great heath Recovery,

Cons: Low base damage, Low Armor

Average:  Speed, Mana

 

Taunts: 

 

1. I devour the living and the dead

2. High pitched hiss

3. I love the taste of fear

4. Who turned on the lights?

 

Game Play: Xinex is a fast attacker draining life from his victim as he goes, armor is not necessary as this would slow him down and stop him from using his liquid body to attack.

Xinex cant handle heavy assault for long periods of time as each attack on him separates his body (like hitting a large bucket of liquid silicon with a baseball bat) making it hard for him to pull him self back together.    

 

Back-story:

 

Xinex was born in the dark caverns of the under world, but unlike the other Demigods, he was created by a God who used his blood and the pure evil that lurked there. he was designed to protect the caves leading to the Fountain of Youth from mortal man, Xinex was trained to hunt down any man, women or child that might wonder into the winding caverns and tunnels of the under world.

When his creator died Xinex was freed from his under ground imprisonment and now wonders the world hunting and devouring the living as he goes.

Because of the unique circumstances leading to Xinex’s berth, the Gods decided that he was eligible to claim his furthers throne as he was part God and would make the tournament or interesting.            

           

             

AbilitiesActive:

            Devouring  – 5 Lvls. – 1000 mana per sec  – Dealing 100/200/300/400/500 damage per second and transferring it to himself – Xinex lunges his body at the target covering it in a black breathing orb, while the target inside Xinex it is quickly devoured.  

 

 

            Strike – 3 Lvls. – 500 mana – Dealing 250/650/1050 Damage – Xinex molds his arm in to a jet of black liquid and thrusts it at the target, knocking the target back and stunning it for 1/2/3 seconds.

 

            Clone – 5 Lvls. – 1500 mana – For every level, Xinex can split in to 1/2/3/4/5 carbon copies of himself and can attack multiple targets or focus on one, this hit points are also split, making him vulnerable to heavy attacks, but devastating to lonely demigods that go wondering off alone.

 

            Deadly Trap – 3 Lvls. – 1000 mana – Dealing 600/1200/1800 Damage – Xinex uses his body as a deadly trap, by molding into the floor, Xinex waits for something to run over him, just as this happens Xinex thrusts up from underneath with large spicks squiring everything in the area. (15 radius). Xinex can come out of this mode at any time, but while he is in it no one can see him.

 

            Evacuate  – 5 Lvls. – 300 mana per second -–  Xinex molds into a stream of fast past liquid increasing his movement speed by 40%/80%/120%/160%/200%. Xinex can not attack in this mode (great for moving around the battle field fast or running away)

          

AbilitiesPassive:

            Life Steal – 5 lvl – Causes Xinex to receive +20/+30/+40+50/+60 Hit Points on every attack.

                                   

So this is my Demigod design, let me know what you guys think.

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Reply #1 Top

Are you sure he's not a water elemental?

Reply #3 Top

Interesting! I like it

 

 

Concept:

* * ' " " [two and a half stars out of five stars]

- Is your demigod original? yes

[you're not coping or editing anyone else's work]

- Does our demigod have a story that ties in to the games mythology? no

[try to get a story that some how ties in with The Progenitor or his children]

- Does your demigod have abilties/stats that ties in to his/her story? yes/no

[The abilities match their character. You're demigod has no stats. This may not be a RPG but that doesn't mean that things shouldn't be convincing in our fantasy realm]

- Does you demigod have a creative desing? no

[It's plain! Sure its a gruesome monster, but the abilties and appearence require more deatails. Don't worry much about this though, has developers can fix this.]

- Is your demigod appropriate for the game? yes

[it definatly not a JKdemi]

Balance:

* ' " " " [One and a half stars out of five stars]

- Does your demigod's stats provide fair advantages to weak abilities? no

[Your demigod doesn't have stats]

- Does your demigod's stats provide fair disadvantages to strong abilities? no

[Your demigod doesn't have stats]

- Does the abilities have well distributed mana cost? yes

[Their mana cost provide a good limit to anything that might cause the demigod to be over powered]

- Does the abilties have well distributed cooldown time and casting time? no

[It's plain! Sure its a gruesome monster, but the abilties and appearence require more deatails. Don't worry much about this though, has developers can fix this.]

- Does the lasting time and stackability of abilties cause any distortions to the character's balance in combat? yes/no

[Some/one ability(ies) need a time limit but don't/doesn't have one. None of the abilities have stackability so, no unbalancing opportunities here.]

 

Total of 2/5 Stars >> ranked:   bad, ok, good, great, signed

Reply #4 Top

lol hey phelps, its me, the legendary UncleanBeast! *Roars while rubbing nipples at computer desk like a noob* Although Vita is a genuis, he is a dumbfuck (hope he didint see that lol ) he was kinda off balance with his reveiw, as your concept was well desinged and very original. The abilities are awsome, but i think he should like steal health with all of his abilites, and not deal nearly as much damage because, it makes sense he would drain people, right? Anyways do better on that little story of yours, but its very original!

Reply #5 Top

Quoting UncleanBeast, reply 4
lol hey phelps, its me, the legendary UncleanBeast! *Roars while rubbing nipples at computer desk like a noob* Although Vita is a genuis, he is a dumbfuck (hope he didint see that lol ) he was kinda off balance with his reveiw, as your concept was well desinged and very original. The abilities are awsome, but i think he should like steal health with all of his abilites, and not deal nearly as much damage because, it makes sense he would drain people, right? Anyways do better on that little story of yours, but its very original!

 

LMAO!!!!!!!!

On my defence: my review contains everything except the balancing issues on the power of abilities, because as DirtyCritter said, I'm a dumbfuck with that! So I only give you what I can. Sorry about my limited advice, but behold, as my advice is always proper. So, Phelps, I personally would enjoy having your demigod into the game, but so far he has a few rough spots. Breathe, it's just fine, brush him up and I will sign!

Reply #6 Top

lol maybe a warrior hero, king nimoth mortal demigod

all his attacks are weak and cheap and need to be used in combos to be effective ^.^

Reply #7 Top

lol dude vita, i was kidding about the whole dumbfuck comment. Anyways, it was a good reveiw, but a little early don't you think? I mean he just got him out! Give a break (then crush him underfoot). Call me a dumbfuck if you wish, was just messing around :)

Reply #8 Top

Quoting UncleanBeast, reply 7
lol dude vita, i was kidding about the whole dumbfuck comment. Anyways, it was a good reveiw, but a little early don't you think? I mean he just got him out! Give a break (then crush him underfoot). Call me a dumbfuck if you wish, was just messing around

 

jk or not, it was a good point, so I elaborated upon it. Why was it early though, his demigod is fine and just needs a few things changed, thats all, it's not early. lol. i dont get it.

Reply #9 Top

lol here is what i mean dude. Okay, envision this as a video game, okay? Well imagine his Demigod is the beta or Demo. This is not the final version, wait till the community makes more commetns and suggestions lol. I get your points as to this was not too early as you are giving him pointers but... oh screw it who cares? lol

Reply #10 Top

Thanks guy's for the loving support :')  I will take the info and hit the drawing board, watch this space,

Will be back as soon as i can fix my Demigod.:waaaa: