banned for I can understand.
In some places, she just draws out thoughts in a way which extend and repeat very momentary ideas and that can make people feel very messed up given their usual mental timing.
She also has the same issues with grammar or sentence structure that everyone else does, but given the pacing of the writing, those flaws can trip you up more than average.
She's more a fan of poetry and that shows, but the current trend in writing is for prose. I've tried to find a middle ground between styles in my last post and one other in the past, but it is very different from the other lore writers. Some can stomach it; some can't.