Precious Time

from JoeUser Forums

I love the days of me and my girl

In the sun watching clouds unfurl

Or on the couch watch a favoured movie

Laughing and loving being togetherly

 

I love the nights of my and my girl

Playing the bend and stretch and curl

Feeling the love between our skin

Letting the cooling sweat soak in

 

I love the mornings of me and my girl

Bedsheets and hair turned in a whirl

Dizzy with dreams had of each other

Of enchanted lands, lives and lovers

 

I love these times of me and my girl

The seconds, minutes, hours and days

The weeks, months, years and decades

Pass us by quickly but our love never fades

poetry
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Reply #1 from Stardock Forums Top

Nice. :D

~Zoo

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Reply #2 from Stardock Forums Top

I wrote this as an opposite statement to my previous poem.  This is actually more like the real me than anything else.

Nice

Thanks, mate.

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Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
I love the days of me and my girl
In the sun watching clouds unfurl


Yes, very nice! I do think you and your girl would enjoy the clouds even more if you would experience being above and falling through them, though.  ;) 
Reply #4 from Stardock Forums Top

This was very lovely and kind of summery.

You have a poetic knack my friend.

Reply #5 from Stardock Forums Top

Roy,

if you would experience being above and falling through them, though

You mean I'd enjoy them more with my eyes closed and the sound of my own voice screaming in my ears :lol:

Kelly,

You have a poetic knack

Why thank you m'am :)  I do try...

Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
SanCho, thanks mate.
Reply #8 from Stardock Forums Top

Very good, mate.

Time indeed is precious and who better to spend it with but your love one.

Reply #9 from Stardock Forums Top

who better to spend it with but your love one.

Yes, who better indeed.  Thanks, mate. :)

Reply #10 from Stardock Forums Top

This is now one of my fave poems from you. :)

Reply #11 from Stardock Forums Top

Rose,

Thanks.  I'm glad you like it that much too.  :)

Reply #12 from Stardock Forums Top

I tought this was a great little verse, captured the childlike simplicity of love at its most basic. Good show.

Reply #13 from Stardock Forums Top

Buddah,

Yes, I was going for the simple child-like wonder of love.   Glad you saw it. :)