Madness

There is a hallway. There is a hallway and it is dark. I cannot see the end.

 

 

I proceed to walk, becoming ever more enveloped in the darkness.  The sense of dread is rising up inside me, choking me.

 

 

The smell is foul. Mold, humidity, rot- all of these smells bombard my very being and yet I continue. 

 

 

Farther and farther I tread. I begin to feel a sudden coolness.  A breeze tickles my skin sending a shiver down my spine.  The fluttering breeze means one thing- a way out.

 

 

Faster and faster I go, searching for the source.  A creak, a groan I hear around me.  Is something behind me?  No, it's something ahead.

 

 

I see a dim, flickering light in front of me.  I slow my pace.  I approach with caution.  A door at the end of this hall, wooden and heavy, swings slightly open and nearly closes.  The hinges squeak ever so softly. 

 

 

I reach for the doorknob, and fear grips my heart with a cold and ever tightening fist.  I'm terrified. 

 

 

I finally grasp the knob, it is cool under my sweaty palm.  I push it forward.  Light blinds me and I stumble into the next room.

 

 

My eyes adjust and I look around.  My jaw drops, and my eyes widen. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I see madness and then I become it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Zoo

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Reply #1 Top
Cool little story there, Zoo. Reminds me of this old thing I remember watching sometime in the late sixties when was a kid at my grandma's one day. WWW Link watch it sometime when you have an hour to spare 'cause it's still good even today.
Reply #2 Top
Cool little story there, Zoo. Reminds me of this old thing I remember watching sometime in the late sixties when was a kid at my grandma's one day. WWW Link watch it sometime when you have an hour to spare 'cause it's still good even today.


Thanks, Roy. Hmm, I'll find some time to watch this...probably not until next weekend, though. Got another exam this week to focus on...*sigh*

~Zoo
Reply #3 Top
There is some pretty strong imagery in this mate. Nice one...
Reply #4 Top
There is some pretty strong imagery in this mate. Nice one...


Heh, thanks. I was just experimenting with some suspense writing...seeing how it turns out.

~Zoo