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June 9, 2004 11:06 PM from

recently my dear kid has been illed for many days.
and I have to work all days ,has no time to take care of her.
feel so Uncomfortable.
wish Saturday or Sunday has time to play with her , take care of her ,
make her happy,
Wish you all ok .my darling.mirabel-wei

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Reply #1 June 9, 2004 11:09 PM from

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This is supposed to be a poem right? You might want to give the break line again and also say it is a poem and grammar does sometimes count. Anyways It ha a flow to it that is rather nice.

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