Snow

from JoeUser Forums
white and pure
silencing all-
the birds, their calls
hushed.
Each flake
exquisite,
unique
Tasty to teeny tongues
Deathly, dangerous, devious
on state-route sixty-six.
Snow
muffles the screams
downtown
the pouring blood
now a trickle
its cold
slows hearts
"Snow, snow,
I love it so!"

White and pure,
silencing all.
writing
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top

Not bad.  Reminds me of Al's style...very abrupt lines.

~Zoo

Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
I'm trying to mature my writing a bit.
All my work seems young and stupid now that I look back on it...
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Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top

Fun thing about writing is that it grows like anything else.  It develops its own form and sense of style.

~Zoo