A New Age

You would think, that the future would be bright? But how can light exist in a dark universe. The story of humanity is, like all stories, one of hardship. But it is also one of bravery. It is not a new story, but one that has been written thousends of times in the course of history. It is of how the smallest of things can escalate.

Humanity's problems started in 2020. The world's tempreture was accelerating, even after everything humanity had done. Nations threatened one another. The leaders of countries believed space was no longer a viable option. It was just too expensive. Only the moon was ever colonised.

In 2075, scientists found something. The world was heating up because of solar flares. They had peaked around 2065. They had gotten weaker since then. This annual lfare did not come in 2075. Or any year after that. The world was cooling down fast. Farms were failing. All that was left were the farms of the African-Mediterranian coast, and mexico. The world erupted into war in 2106. It lasted until 2200, when the flares began again. The world reorganised itself, and was finally at pease by 2210. They built where they could. Wars were still going on around Zaire, but that was cast aside.

The world went back to space travel. They started to develop ships using the cold fusion generators developed during the war. They elected a face to lead them into this golden age. They elected the young Alan Bradley as Govenor Supreme of Earth. It was wise, but stubborn. By 2220, they had develpoped the hyperdrive. But the prototypes had all malfuctioned, and ended up on alien planets, to be developed by themselves.

By 2224, they got it right. The flag ship TAS (Terran Allience, as the UN now called itself, Ship) Magellan succesfuly made it to Proxima Centuri and back. Two more ship were constructed, the TAS Armstrong, a ship to take civililians to the stars, and the the TAS Motsognir, a mining ship.

Now is the dawn of 2225, and Alan Bradley looks out to Atlantis, the capital of Earth, situated in the middle of the Atlantic. Tomorrow will be an important day for him, as the world looks on, and humans take towards the stars. The stars. In old earth stories, stars were gods. Magical dots in the sky, whom none knew how they got there, or how they stayed up. But the stars are about to get much closer. Very quickly.
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Not bad, a few grammar/spelling mistakes, but not bad. Although, I have to admit that AARs based on the Terrans are getting pretty old. If you want this AAR to be a success you'll have to really sell it, make it stand out amongst the many other Terran AARs. Perhaps tell it in a slightly different style, like "Diary of a Terran Soldier", "The Other Shoe", or "Green Pastures." Those are some of the most original AARs ever written, and they are some of the best aswell.
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Perhaps tell it in a slightly different style, like "Diary of a Terran Soldier", "The Other Shoe", or "Green Pastures." Those are some of the most original AARs ever written, and they are some of the best aswell.


Hey, read "Fall from Grace". Its also purely original.
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I think I'll go for a sort of Space Opera thing based on the crew of the TAS Magellan. What elce going on'll just be background stuff. So characters:
The Hero
Name: Slate Wiseswift
Age: 40
Job: Captain of the TAS Magellan
The Lancer
Name: Cody Quinn
Age: 35
Job: Second in Command
The Big Guy
Name: Tex Hammersword
Age: 30
Job: Weapons Officer
The Smart Guy
Name: Jay Monk
Age: 32
Job: Head Engineer
The Girl
Name: Sam Dragonshadow
Age: 29
Job: Head Doctor

Well, there are the characters to go on with. More will be added later.
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Your characters sound like they are heroes from WarCraft III.
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Still cool though.
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I didn't mean it as a complaint, and I'm sorry if it came off that way. It was just an observation.

For instance, Sam Dragonshadow sounds like an Orc Far Seer, or a Blademaster. Tex Hammersword sounds like it could be a Paladin, or a Beastmaster.

I hope you start putting in some story soon.
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Episode 1.1: You know something's wrong when it gets too good

'TAS Magellan I, you are ready for take off.'
'Thank you ground control. Engaging thrusters now.' Replied Wiseswift. 'Jay, engage the drive.'
'Yessir. Engaging now.' Monk pushed the series of colourful buttons to engage the take-off engines. They were in a shuttle to the Magellan, 40 miles off the surface of the Earth. The last of the shuttles to go.
2 minutes later, they were docked and ready to get to there stations. Wiseswift got used to his big Captain's chair. Quinn settled into his smaller First Mate's chair. Everyone elce also got familurised themselves with their stations. They ran through a few pre-flight checks.
They came out of Earth's orbit and looked out to the universe. It was dark. And cold-looking. 'Hmm, inviting.' Said Quinn sarcastically.
Wiseswift was about to retort when a communication came from Earth from Admiral Knight Strongswift. 'Magellan. Welcome to your first day of duty. We need you to explore these co-ordinates after our sensors picked up something strange there. Srongswift out.' A smile crossed Wiseswift's face. Their first mission.
'Monk, get us to the co-ordinates I'm sending you,' he turned the comm off. 'This is going to be good.'
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Episode 1.2 The going gets tough

"Captain's log, Earth date 10 January 2226. After searching a group of meteorites and finding nothing intresting, we saw another blip on the radar. We investigated, and found that it was a wormhole. We went through it, and found ourselves nearly 30 weeks away from Earth. We had to go on autopilot, allowing the 20 crew mates to 'mingle'. Wiseswift out."
Wiseswift was down in the canteen. He had his eye on the Head doctor, Dr. Dragonshadow. But she wanted to eat her food in piece. There were 15 men and 5 women aboard the Magellan. All 15 men but Quinn, Hammersword and Monk were trying to get the doctor's attention. The captian came close to succeding, but failed when the doctor asked for some melons (for breakfast), and the captain quipped "No need, you got a good pair already." Quinn is now looking after the ship, while the captain is in the medi-bay.