osterloh family the third

i will try it again maybe this time you guys will like my beginning.
and as i have done on other AARs you can do the newsflashes.
just remember i did them to enhance the story not to destroy it thank you


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PREFACE


In the year 2050, a small group of people at the end of world war 3, realized that the
nations of the Earth would never stop fighting.

So they pooled their resources and bought a small group of islands in the south pacific. There were 10 relatively large islands and a couple of dozen or so of small islands.

Secretly they had decided to build a fleet of 100 ships to take them to mars and away from all of the killing. It would take them 10 years to build the ships they needed and the to genetically alter plants to tolerate the high radiation on mars.

Openly they became a religious group, building paradise on Earth. They bought up all the used plastic bottles. Using them to make bottle rafts. Such as the one currently being built in Mexico.

Satellite photos showed these rafts being tied together and slowly building away from each island. Where they touched a dirt road was built connecting the islands together.

As the decade ended, the rumors of them building the space ships was getting so. That the USA and Russia sent in some spies and discovered the fleet of ships being built. They demanded that the fleet be dismantled. But the group refused to do so.

The USA sent in a carrier group to destroy the fleet. Having planned for this fighters were launched to slow down the carrier group as the fleet launched. As the fight went the carrier fighters were able to stop ten of the ships. But they missed the flag ship Julie and the other 90 ships.


Because they had left early, they had to travel through the same region of space that all of the mars probes that had been lost had also traveled through. As they approached the region of space where all of those probes had disappeared. They found a small alien probe. Which was transmitting on a very low bandwidth to low to reach Earth, a vast computer program that took all of the computers in the fleet to acquire.


As the probe stopped transmitting it opened a rip in space. This rip consumed the whole fleet. When they came back into normal space, they discovered that they were in a new solar system billions of light years from home or at least they thought they were that far away.

This system was similar to the sol system. The same number of planets everything was the same. Doing a survey of the earth type planet. They found no intelligent life on the planet. But they did discovery some ancient ruins. They scattered across the planet with the leaders landing near the ruins.

And as planned they dismantled the fleet and used them as the beginnings of the civilization on this new planet, however they decided not to dismantle the flag ship and instead increased its sensors and computers for use when they were ready to explore this system more.


The year is now 2170, and having been on this planet for a century their eyes turn once more to the heavens. Having studied the probe download for a 100 years they have discovered that the program itself was corrupted and they would never be able to understand the language. They did however recover the blueprints for what could only be called a space gate. And as they studied the blue prints they found that they could duplicate the gate but on a much smaller scale and use it as a ships engine. but it would take them time to build and refine the method.


Also that same year, an archaeologist discovered in the ruins a small device about the size and shape of a Rubik cube. As he was fiddling with it, he hit a button on it and a load voice in English cried"you have activated me and i shall increase the planet quality of 5 planets in this system by 30 and also of all the other major race home systems in the galaxy. At this the entire planet started shaking and a week later all of the buildings were destroyed, they found that this planet had a lot more room to live on than before.


The year is now 2220, this new race calling itself the Osterloh Family and having over the last 200 years become that of a hive group, has named their sun Osterloh and their planet Julie and named the other 4 earth type planets in the system Daniel, Boo, Jack, and Dude. They are ready once more to go back into space and colonize the other 4 planets.


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The year is now 2220, this new race calling itself the Osterloh Family and having over the last 200 years become that of a hive group, has named their sun Osterloh and their planet Julie and named the other 4 earth type planets in the system Daniel, Boo, Jack, and Dude. They are ready once more to go back into space and colonize the other 4 planets.


The leader Daniel knew that this was going to be a long day he had several meetings lined up.

The first meeting was with the lead engineer in ship design. He was coming in with the blue prints for two ships that everyone thought was important to start with.


Bob told that first of all they would maintain the original flag ship Julie.

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The first blue print he had was for a mining ship to mine the asteroids in the system.

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the second blue print was for a colony ship


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after looking over the data and the blue prints Daniel decided that the these ships would not be the ships that they would be using. instead he ordered the engineer to use the blue prints he himself had come up with that week and he ordered him to build two colony ships and not the mining ship


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he then told the engineer that all future ships would be based on the following four hulls one for civilian ships such as colony, mining and star base construction



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the first of three combat hulls this one will use missiles as weapons


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the second of the combat hulls would use energy weapons


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the third would use projectile weapons


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and we will also have orbital defense platforms based off of this design
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he then called in the Julies governor and told her that he had come up with a plan to use all of this space that we have on this planet with quality of 50 after that device and our own natural ability to live in more areas than normal

the other 4 planets will end up with qualities for Daniel-44, boo-37, jack-37, and dude-37

took a minute and called in the other 4 governors that had been picked for the above four planets and told them that Julie, Boo, Jack, and Dude would be financial worlds and Daniel would be the empires learning capital.

all planets would have 15 industrial parks on them and one ship construction yard

Julie would have 6 entertainment centers, a farm and 17 markets
boo, jack, and dude would have have 4 entertainment centers, a farm and 16 markets
Daniel would have 4 entertainment centers, a farm and 23 research centers

and that all other planets in the empire would have 3 factories, one ship yard, two entertainment centers, and the rest would be markets.

special exceptions would be made as needed

for instance after the upheaval it was found that two areas on Julie were so Serene that they just naturally lifted every bodies spirit. which means of course that they were exploited to the max.


game note the two pics of ships that are dull are that way because i didn't save them in the game
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he then called in the Julies governor and told her that he had come up with a plan to use all of this space that we have on this planet with quality of 50 after that device and our own natural ability to live in more areas than normal

the other 4 planets will end up with qualities for Daniel-44, boo-37, jack-37, and dude-37

took a minute and called in the other 4 governors that had been picked for the above four planets and told them that Julie, Boo, Jack, and Dude would be financial worlds and Daniel would be the empires learning capital.

all planets would have 15 industrial parks on them and one ship construction yard

Julie would have 6 entertainment centers, a farm and 17 markets
boo, jack, and dude would have have 4 entertainment centers, a farm and 16 markets
Daniel would have 4 entertainment centers, a farm and 23 research centers

and that all other planets in the empire would have 3 factories, one ship yard, two entertainment centers, and the rest would be markets.

special exceptions would be made as needed

for instance after the upheaval it was found that two areas on Julie found to be ancient factory sites one increasing the factory production by 300% and the other by 100%

game note the two pics of ships that are dull are that way because i didn't save them in the game


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please let me know what you think so far thank you
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great work daniel. i love the beginning. i like the AAR:s that are more like stories. Not to much technical stuff. and u nailed that in the beginning.

Great work man   
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On January 8th the planetary council was called in, to come up with how the new government would look for the empire.

After the insuring agreements about this and that, and taking about a year to hammer everything out. The new government would be as follows, there would be the empire council lead by the president. Under him would be the sector governor if a sector had more than one system in it. Then there would be system governor if a system had more than one habitable planet. Then there would be the planetary governor. with all of there insuring councils of course.


The presidents job would be to interact with other races, including peace treaties, and handling of wars, all the governors jobs were to protect and control the commerce in their area of control.


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for those of you who did read what i had written please bear with me i am going to try again with a new game and try to make it more story like. what i haven't deleted is just part of the preface anyways.
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STAR DATE 01082226


Daniel was sitting in his office playing a new computer game called galactic civilizations 20.


He had a full day ahead of him and his first meeting wasn't for an hour. So he got some play time in.

Daniel's first meeting was with the lead scientist. Daniel shook hands with her when she came in and sat down.
She wanted to know what the research priorities were going to be for the next year. She wanted to start learning how to communicate with alien races. Daniel told her start with the Hyper drive and learn to build engines first. Then we will learn engineering so we can learn how to make better markets and better factories. We also need better labs and entertainment.

When the Economist cam in. Daniel told him to follow the same orders he had been given 6 years ago.

His meeting with the shipyard manager went good. Daniel told him to send out the two Egg sack colony ships to Daniel and Dude. Also build the next two Egg sacks in the next two weeks and send them to Boo and Jack.


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i renamed this ship the Egg sack


STAR DATE 02012226

When our colonists landed on Jack. They found a sentient life form. We made them join the hive.

The flag ship Julie encountered a ship manned by humans, at least they looked human. They were unable to communicate with each other, so they waved at each other and left. The captain of the Julie has requested a universal translator. Daniel told him he would get one as soon as we knew what one was.


STAR DATE 04012226

The United Planets was called to order for the first time. Daniel didn't recall joining but since the meeting was taking place over the computer he logged in. The UP wanted to know how many techs we should share with everyone. The the Fathers voted none. Daniel voted for 3 techs. We shared 3 techs. We got the translator some extreme colonizations, and how to fight in space.


STAR DATE 07012226

Encountered the Torians. During the conversation, The Torians thanked Daniel for the Hyper drive. Daniel asked them, "What are you talking about.". The Torian told Daniel that they had received a radio broadcast from Earth on how to build the engine.
Daniel said, "You must be talking about our brothers, we are no longer from Earth. Some how we missed that broadcast.".


STAR DATE 01012228

The year 2227 went by quickly and without fanfare we built three long-sight scouts(survey ships), 5 web-spinners(frigates)

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STAR DATE 03012228

The Governor of the new colony Skowbo IV called. He told Daniel that they had found a small pod like creature. When this creature bonded with a colonist the colonists IQ went up by at least 300 points. The downside was that it caused sever pain for the colonist. The Governor wanted to know if they should destroy the pods or use them. Daniel said, "Give them painkillers.".






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we are looking for those who want adventure. come we need all we can get to colonize new and weird planets. Just think you can end up with IQs of over 300 just like the colonists on Skowbo IV did.
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if anyone is reading this let me know i will finish this and then try a more story like one after that
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STAR-DATE 02012228


Julie is upgraded to a Black Widow cruiser, after she finished surveying anomalies.
the longsights were reassigned to look for needed resources.

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STAR-DATE 01012229


This last year have been colonizing like crazy going so fast it is just too hard to keep count. We have also been producing Black Widow cruisers and Webspinner FFs.

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STAR-DATE 04152229


Our friends the Scottlings have sent us a trade ship to set up a trading with us. We have agreed to allow this for now keeping an eye on it of course.


STAR DATE 05012229


Since the trading seems to be going so good over the last couple of weeks. Daniel contacted Walter Montgomery leader of the Scottlings and a after a couple of hours of haggling. He was able to get all of the Scottlings tech except for plasma weapons. We also got an economic treaty and a research treaty and 2225 bc for all of our techs.

Feeling very good about the trade with the Scottlings, Daniel contacted the The Fathers and was able to secure some of their techs. Going with the flow Daniel then contacted the Torian and was able to secure all 4 of their techs for some trade goods.



STAR-DATE 06012229


The galaxy entered a small recession. Tax revenue dropped 25%. The funny thing is however that the need to travel has hit the citizens of the galaxy so tourism revenue has tripled.


STAR-DATE 10012229


We meat the Yor, They just dismissed us as unimportant and went away. Those robots will learn the errors of their ways.
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i need some encouragement let me know if you are reading this please
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STAR-DATE 10012229



The Scottlings have graced us with another trade route. This one to Daniel.


We have also meet another robot race the Dark Yor. We traded for their plasma weapons, an economic treaty, a research treaty and 908 bc. We gave them repair bots, ultra spices, hull plating and advanced water world.


The the fathers traded us planetary protection and invasion.


STAR-DATE 11012229


We started construction of our first true planetary star base the Webbase C.


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Meet the Drengin. Just as their leader started talking the translator broke. We waved at him in the traditional Osterloh Family greeting. When you don't like somebody you make a fist and shake it at the offending party.


STAR-DATE 12012229


With the Scottlings having set up another trade route with us we decided to return the favor this time. We gave them all of our old Webbases.



STAR-DATE 01012230



Started construction of the Webbase D.

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This star base is so expensive that it can/will only be built in the home system.



STAR-DATE 03012230


Alien archaeologists on Hyaden 1 have found an amor device. When they activated it. It doubled the PQ of the planet.


We also meet the Thalans. They say they are not from a galaxy. They also said,"That they were here to re-balance the galaxy.". Daniel said,"I didn't know the galaxy was tilted.".

Traded all of our tech for all of the Yors tech and we got a research treaty from them. We finally found a use for all of that fast food grease.

After a short bloodless coup. We became a republic and our first senate vote left the Federalists in charge with 61 seats.

Meet the Krynn. They did the normal posturing. Daniel said,"Whatever.".

We also meet the Iconians. They stated that they wanted to liberate their planets from the Yor.



STAR-DATE 04012230


The Scottlings have set up another trade route. They also gave some of the Webbases that we gave them to the Iconians. So we gave the Scottlings all of our Webbase Bs.

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Started construction of the Funnel Web(battleship).


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Very few ships can stand up to the Funnel Web

We also began construction of the Tarantula

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This is our forward command ship. When it shows up it takes control of all ships in the sector.


We have also began building our first space city, the Webcity.


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The first one will be used as a star base over Julie. Because of it's expense it will only be used as an interstellar mall.





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They were unable to communicate with each other, so they waved at each other and left


hahahahaha  that is hillariouse. keep it comming daniel   
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The first one will be used as a star base over Julie. Because of it's expense it will only be used as an interstellar mall.


  HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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STARDATE 10012230


Election results. Federalists gain 4 seats now have 65.

STARDATE 11012230

Started giving the Scottlings, the Gnat a little fighter.

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STARDATE 12012230


The Scottlings have given some of my Webbases Bs to the Torian. Which is too bad because the Torian are the first on my hit parade. As you can see they have me boxed in.




STARDATE 01012231


UP vote on how many weapons to be put on transports.

Daniel voted for 5. The results were 3.


Upgraded all warships and planetary bases in prep with the war against the Torian. The Torian have built some long range colony ships and are trying to colonize the last 4 planets in my territory.


The economic sectary came running in. Screaming that the upgrade to the warships and the bases had put us in the hole 40,000 bc. Daniel took the report an scratched out the 40,000 and wrote in 2000. “There he said,”Problem solved.”.


STARDATE 02012231


After a month of demanding the Torian remove their ships from our territory. The senate voted today to go to war. The vote was 72 to 28. In compliance with UP law, the Torian were forced to move 9 ships out of our territory.


STARDATE 03012231


Gave the Scottlings an extra Egg Sack and another Gnat.

Grave news the Torian have conquered Brindle 2.

Started construction of the Cobra transports. Designed to carry and support hive soldiers in battle. Also ordered all combat fleets to attack targets of opportunity.

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STARDATE 03012231


In the first battle the Torian colony ship had no chance. Even tho it did get one hit in. It seems that the Torian have armed the colony ships. It took the Torian three attempts to captor Brindle 3. They lost nearly 4000 troops taking it. Launched the first Cobra, ordered it to retake Brindle 3. Started to remove the Torian scouts and other non combat ships in Osterloh family territory.


Senate election, lost 20 seats down to 40, still in control of the senate.


Finished colonize all planets in my territory.



STARDATE 05012231


Scottlings have given us another trade route.

Launched our first Tarantula, sent it to Toria the Torian capital.

After three attempts the Torian conquered Hatch 1.

The Torian attacked one of my Webbase Cs. They lost six fighters and only hit the base 3 times doing 3 points of damage. Will have to remember to get someone out there and repaint.

(the game crashed when i tried to redo the battle so i could get a pict of the start of the battle sorry)

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Keep em commin Dude!
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STARDATE 05012231


Krynn gave me 800bc not to attack them.



In a second attack the Torian used my Webbases, which they got from the Scottlings, against me. They did more damage than the regular Torian ships did. My Webbases C proved to be far better than the Webbases Bs in combat, as they should be.

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STARDATE 06012231


Retook Brindle 3, and Brindle 2.

Cobra transport attacked by a Torian fleet of 5 fighters and one escort. The Cobra was badly damaged but survived.


STARDATE 07012231


The Torian surrendered to the Yor. BYE BYE YOR. We must of really scared them. They hadn't even lost one of their own planets.


A vote for war with the Yor was held. The results were 66 for and 34 against.


Signed an Alliance and Economic treaty with the Drengin. We also gave them a research treaty for attacking the The Fathers.


Met the Jessuins.



STARDATE 08012231


The Arcean only want respect. We will show them respect from the barrel of a gun.


Upgraded all ships and bases with emc 3. The your are armed with missiles. Best to use point defense against them. The economic sectary came running in again. Before he could say anything, Daniel took the report out of his hand and followed the same procedure as before. On the way out, the sectary was heard mumbling to himself,”I sure wish I could do that at home.”. Daniel said to himself,”You and me both brother.”.

Received a freighter from Iconia.



STARDATE 11012231


Standing by our treaty with the Drengin. We have been forced to declare war on the lollipop Iconians.

The Yor are more confident then the Torians. I have lost several Webspinners and a Black widow to them. I have however won every space battle. On the down side I have lost every ground assault that i have mounted. So I have designed the King Cobra to carry more ground troops.

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First fleet battle with the Iconians. They were armed with energy and missile weapons. My fleet consisted of 6 Webspinners and 2 Black Widows. The Iconian fleet had 5 Torian defenders, 1 Terrain frigate and 1 Iconian defender. Battle results a Black Widow received minor damage.


STARDATE 02012232


The Drengin our allies have given us 494bc out of the goodness of their hearts. I think they have hearts.

Researched Aereon missile defense. This seems to be the best missile defense that we can research. Upgraded all ships and bases with this defense. This put the nation in the red 417,872bc. This time when the economic sectary came in, he brought his own pen. We did have to stop all warship production except for the King Cobra.

Attacked a Yor dreadnought, my two Black Widows and one Webspinners did major damage to it.


STARDATE 03012232


The Yor offered peace. They were unwilling to part with any colonies. We said,”No thank you ma'am.”. How do you address a robot.

The Iconians have fallen. They have surrendered to us.

We called the Yor back, knowing all of our attention would be diverted for a while on getting the 31 Iconianian colonies restructured. We agreed to peace with the Yor on the conditions. That the declare war on the The Fathers, The Arcean, the Thalan, and the Krynn. They also agreed to give us Advanced life support, Antimatter power, Diplomatic translators and 1762bc.


The Iconians had Iconia set up as a planet university. So enhanced it and will build a Webcity to defend it. The rest of Iconianian home system will build Webbases Ds.





At this point the game crashed as i was decommissioned a research facility. And i forgot to save the game after the Iconians surrendered. And i don't want to go back and play the last thirty minutes again.

Sorry if i have disappointed anyone.

I will do this again this time more story like and with that stupid surrender button turned off. To the devs i think that the surrender thing needs some tweaking. In the above game The Torian surrendered with all of their colonies still intact and so did the Iconians. With the Iconians i couldn't even have reached their closest system.
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Ok input time

should i have more pics less pics.

let me know what you liked about this unfinished aar and what you didn't like
Reply #20 Top
Not bad, I liked it. Use a few more pictures or make up for that with more storylike wording.

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