JUWC - Haiku - lonely

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Trapped in my own room
No one to see or to speak
loneliness my friend
writing
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
Ah, this oozes melancholy.

Don't some aspects of moving suck? I wrote one of my most solitary songs right after moving one time.

I liked it a lot.
Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top
It oozes something... but I'm not sure I'd call it melancholy. Wallowing self-pity is more like it.

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Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
Nice haiku...too bad it's coming from you feeling down.
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top
It's better than the haikus my old poetry class used to come up with. Our teacher let us write them on Halloween... each person wrote one line, then passed it on for the next person to write a line and so on and so on. There were all creepy, but that was fine since it was Halloween. We did the same thing for Thanksgiving and Christmas... but they all turned out creepy too. People exploding from eating too much turkey, and Santa did some very naughty and evil things.

Ahh, good times.
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
People exploding from eating too much turkey, and Santa did some very naughty and evil things.


I can imagine how much fun they were to read after you were done!
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top
I thought this was sad. Hope you find a cure for your loneliness soon.
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top
Sometimes loneliness can be a friend but I don't know if it is when you're trapped.
Hope you are doing better.